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11/26/21, 10:59 AM
This was totally slow burn sexy. and where can I find me a black slime jacket!
Hypnofeet
11/26/21, 10:01 AM
Great ending! I am curious if you'd consider an alternate ending in which they don't get to escape :-P

11/26/21, 10:17 AM
I’d enjoy that too! @Hypnofeet
11/26/21, 9:16 AM
well written and tied up nicely in the end! thanks for this story!
Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/26/21, 9:05 AM
I love a good story with the power of love
11/25/21, 11:55 PM
Wonderful second part! the first part was confusing but this made it all make sense! Thanks!

11/26/21, 8:45 AM
@Cutlerfan I definitely wasn't a fan of the original ending. Too sad for my tastes. Now I have some idea for another part. 😊
11/26/21, 12:58 AM
You really did it! Six amazing transformations in one story to give Darius a happy (and quirky) ending. Well done.

11/26/21, 8:43 AM
@amul Thank you for the kind words! I'm thinking about doing another chapter or two, for different holidays. Almost definitely a christmas one.
Nov 24, 2021
11/26/21, 6:01 AM
Very hot. I was hoping Bret would call the cops though. Always enjoy imagining a hot macho cop or two falling under the influence of some sexy man stink and turning gay.

11/26/21, 6:42 AM
@mmgood Such a thrill to see you commenting on this site! I hope you have new stories to share with us at some point--I've only been waiting for 17 years!
11/25/21, 4:49 PM
hottest story, period

11/26/21, 6:38 AM
@Tornado thanks man!
11/26/21, 6:05 AM
This was great. Just so hot. You sure know how to make a humiliating situation. And I also liked how he made funny sounds, though I am not into small penis stories, but this was so good.
DD
11/26/21, 2:21 AM
This is a great arc of character development, I'm curious to see what becomes of Archie and Grayson in later chapters, and conflicts with the side characters/personal hang ups.