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Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/26/21, 9:05 AM
I love a good story with the power of love
11/25/21, 11:55 PM
Wonderful second part! the first part was confusing but this made it all make sense! Thanks!

11/26/21, 8:45 AM
@Cutlerfan I definitely wasn't a fan of the original ending. Too sad for my tastes. Now I have some idea for another part. 😊
11/26/21, 12:58 AM
You really did it! Six amazing transformations in one story to give Darius a happy (and quirky) ending. Well done.

11/26/21, 8:43 AM
@amul Thank you for the kind words! I'm thinking about doing another chapter or two, for different holidays. Almost definitely a christmas one.
Nov 24, 2021
11/26/21, 6:01 AM
Very hot. I was hoping Bret would call the cops though. Always enjoy imagining a hot macho cop or two falling under the influence of some sexy man stink and turning gay.

11/26/21, 6:42 AM
@mmgood Such a thrill to see you commenting on this site! I hope you have new stories to share with us at some point--I've only been waiting for 17 years!
11/25/21, 4:49 PM
hottest story, period

11/26/21, 6:38 AM
@Tornado thanks man!
11/26/21, 6:05 AM
This was great. Just so hot. You sure know how to make a humiliating situation. And I also liked how he made funny sounds, though I am not into small penis stories, but this was so good.
DD
11/26/21, 2:21 AM
This is a great arc of character development, I'm curious to see what becomes of Archie and Grayson in later chapters, and conflicts with the side characters/personal hang ups.
11/25/21, 11:49 PM
To see not only Archie, but the kid as well, falling into it and just enjoying themselves and what they like, is as hot as it's sweet. Loving this story, and it's as hot as every other story you've shared with us.
11/25/21, 7:37 PM
to see that archie becoming like this genuinely, it just great !
11/25/21, 7:10 PM
do you have the next chapter for this story.. that would be GREAT!!!!