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2/27/25, 10:40 PM
Great ending for Bill and Steve. Can't wait for Phil and Andy's reality.

3/6/25, 1:49 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I think Phil and Andy's dynamic is my favourite in this one actually!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 3:00 PM
I think I’m going to like that fox.

3/5/25, 10:52 PM
@Anonymous I think you might be right ;)

3/5/25, 11:23 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) maaaaybe
3/5/25, 11:22 PM
So thankful to have found this story! Hoping that there’s more someday?!
3/5/25, 3:45 PM
Nothing easy about writing a sex scene, but you recognized that our emotional investment in the characters makes the sex so much more powerful. Well done, my friend! And compliments to your dialogue -- reads very naturally, just like people talking.

3/5/25, 10:00 PM
@[absman420](/user/show/162063) Thank you! This is high praise, coming from a man who has written sex scenes that I still revisit to this day, at least a decade on from when he originally discovered them! I want my sex scenes to serve the plot and emotional beats of the story: I still want them to be fun and sexy and for guys to read them one-handed, but the sex should flow naturally from the emotions of a scene. Characters fuck because of something that happened between them, or something happens between them because they fuck. Like how in musicals, characters start singing when the emotions get too big for simple dialogue, but here, instead of breaking out into Sondheim, they reenact Tom of Finland pictures!
3/5/25, 5:55 PM
Nice job! I think you’ve got an interesting party idea here. Look forward to more of the adventure.

3/5/25, 9:54 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Thanks!!!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 7:29 PM
Ohhh, I love it! I'm really enjoying this story! Personally, I'd love to know what happened to actor Chis Pewter from Chapter 2 in a later chapter (or in a spinoff, maybe?), I loved how the deeper he went into the interview, the progressively dumber he got. It would be really hot to see him on the set of a sequel, or in a later movie. I imagine the effects would be quite pronounced then!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 11:11 AM
This was such a fun read. I enjoyed it! I’d love to read more~

3/5/25, 5:27 PM
@Anonymous Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on a Part 2, inspired by Cutlerfan's suggestion.
3/5/25, 4:40 PM
Another amazing episode! Thank you!
3/5/25, 3:03 PM
Glad to see a new chapter :)