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Nov 23, 2021
11/24/21, 12:48 PM
Sorry to hear about the writer's block. Love your writing, as always.

11/25/21, 11:15 AM
@amul thanks <3
Nov 24, 2021
11/25/21, 10:45 AM
Another excellent story. I love how Bret keeps regaining his rational thinking only to lose it again as he takes a deep, long whiff of "Uncle Frank".
11/25/21, 10:44 AM
What a great Thanksgiving treat. I love this series and I can't wait to see who will become CJ's next victim.
11/25/21, 2:57 AM
I'm glad he helped a guy come out. Me thinks his "friends" need a visit from Chad as well.

Martin
11/25/21, 10:00 AM
@Cutlerfan Thank you, glad you like this little adventure. I do plan to bring back those two, let's see in what way!
Anonymous
11/23/21, 5:42 PM
Would love to see Chad go after the OTHER two "friends" of Soren. Hey, he smelled them on Soren anyway and he needs to fuck some more. 😁

Martin
11/25/21, 9:59 AM
Thanks... I guess there are many adventures to explore for Chad, and I'm sure we'll hear more about Søren's 'friends' - maybe not quite what you expect 😝
Nov 24, 2021
11/25/21, 9:03 AM
How about a Muscle, Daddy, or Bear shake or a combo of those?
Nov 24, 2021
11/25/21, 9:02 AM
Please continue!
Nov 24, 2021
11/25/21, 5:08 AM
Well-written and very interesting! One thing I like about you, Hypnothrill, is that you aren't afraid to try new kinks or revisit uncommon ones. In this case, they're kinks that I don't share, so it did not turn me on, but it's still an amazing story. You should be proud! :)
Jan 22, 2007
One Ring
6/21/19, 1:08 AM
I did write one. I'll see if I still have a copy of it....

11/25/21, 3:58 AM
@One Ring did you ever find that copy of the sequel to the this ?
11/24/21, 7:45 PM
What a wonderful chapter addition. I continue to marvel at you and cuddle's detail work put into world building. I particularly liked how Jasper asked for something that Rhys couldn't just snap his fingers and deliver, and the sort of protective response it drew from Rhys. Adding an element of vulnerability into the otherwise unassailably powerful coins adds a unique texture which I think may prove a useful nucleation point (in terms of Zeus's affliction). Although there are often power imbalances which favor the "dom" (Rhys), I do appreciate it when there is an avenue for vulnerable inroads for character building. It tends to add color to what otherwise might be somewhat monochromatic. The current trajectory of their relationship definitely tends towards something more meaningful than what might be otherwise implicit in the designations of "Owner" and "Pet" at the surface level which is far more interesting to me. I shall personally continue to hope this trend continues :) I also appreciate how Rhys is perceptive enough to notice the changes in Jasper. It seems like it should become obvious to him over time that something unusual is occurring. I do wonder what his reaction would be to knowing what was being done to Jasper. I am quite delighted that you have delved into the specific of Rhys's past pet. It does seem rather like this fact coupled with Aris's current modifications to his pet might have an interesting culmination--or even argument--between Rhys and Aris. Up to this point, it has been explored how good it feels to Jasper when Rhys is pleased. I am curious what a negative emotion (not necessarily directed at Jasper) might engender within Jasper. Backstory work is always welcome. Thus far, we have seen lots of scenes where Rhys and Jasper have been out amongst others. I am quite curious what measure of domestic interactions this absolute adoration might bring forth. And of course, to see how the gradual restoration of the silver river might provide an ongoing plot point. I absolutely tip my hat to you both for continuing to write all of this so well and work in lovely allusions. Your RPs must be really special to create such a vivid story. I am agog to see what happens next. I was quite delighted to see a new chapter appear and shall eagerly await your next installment Cheers and Thanks, ~Jayden

11/25/21, 3:20 AM
@Jayden Thank you so much for this kind, reflective commentary so far! Cuddle-switch and I really appreciate hearing what plot points and world building elements are speaking to you so far. We're definitely trying to put a lot of care into the lore of this world and explore the dynamics that these characters have to offer beyond just a D/s relationship. We'll definitely be aiming to keep that meaningful depth of character and relationships going! We're also definitely curious to explore some of the different sets of complications that we're slowly layering in and seeing how they interact! And you've given us some very interesting thoughts here about some scenes and plot points that might be interesting to push on further, some of which we've definitely got plans for and others that raise fun questions. From Cuddle-switch: "Yes, Rhys is noticing things, but he also wants this so badly that he's willing to avoid seeing things. I expect some up and downs there. As for the Coins, they can definitely be just as vulnerable as the rest of us, they just don't let on as much. Building in some of those vulnerabilities and showing Rhys being emotionally vulnerable hopefully shows that they're not unassailable. Also, doing this kind of detailed minor character development is new to me, and difficult, but I'm enjoying learning about it. Let's see what we come up with!" It's honestly a pleasure to collaborate with Cuddle-switch and write together, and I hope that shows. It's also a pleasure to hear that you're enjoying our writing. Thanks again! -- Time & Cuddle-switch