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11/24/21, 12:11 PM
Just gets better and better

11/24/21, 7:19 PM
@Morph Thanks man!
Anonymous
11/24/21, 7:04 PM
Anymore 2 cum..er i mean, come ?
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 5:37 PM
I didn't look at the links, but as I read it I couldn't help but be reminded of Hellraiser because of the Uncle Frank moniker. Reading through certain scenes lended themselves to me adding a "Come to Uncle Frank" like the actor in the movie did.

11/24/21, 6:43 PM
@New Guy in Town Interesting! And entirely a coincidence. I've never seen Hellraiser, and I haven't read much work by Clive Barker.
11/24/21, 6:24 PM
Not bad for a first go. It could use some edits to smooth out the flow and to transition between vignettes. I can see where you want to take this. Solid concept.

11/24/21, 6:37 PM
hey thanks for the feedback man i appreciate the advice@RedPed
Anonymous
11/24/21, 5:33 PM
I'm not a great writer but um curious is there plans to continue this wonderful series
Nov 24, 2021
BCG Great story!
11/24/21, 3:32 PM
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11/24/21, 3:22 PM
Wow! Another gem from a while ago. It would be wonderful if it could continue.
11/24/21, 3:20 PM
I've turned my unfinished series, "The Reflex", into a community story, in case anyone wants to pick up where I left off. I've posted what I had sketched out in the [forum](https://forum.gayspiralstories.com/t/reflex-unfinished/1462), but feel free to take it whatever direction you like.
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 3:16 PM
Love this story. Plus the links r really helped with the story. I wander if Uncle Frank did this with any other family of his before?
Dec 31, 2018
Powerlifter
11/24/21, 2:53 PM
Before you submit a story, why not put it in Microsoft Word and hit SPELL CHECK and GRAMMAR CHECK? This would make it so much easier for people to read.