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11/24/21, 7:45 PM
What a wonderful chapter addition. I continue to marvel at you and cuddle's detail work put into world building. I particularly liked how Jasper asked for something that Rhys couldn't just snap his fingers and deliver, and the sort of protective response it drew from Rhys. Adding an element of vulnerability into the otherwise unassailably powerful coins adds a unique texture which I think may prove a useful nucleation point (in terms of Zeus's affliction). Although there are often power imbalances which favor the "dom" (Rhys), I do appreciate it when there is an avenue for vulnerable inroads for character building. It tends to add color to what otherwise might be somewhat monochromatic. The current trajectory of their relationship definitely tends towards something more meaningful than what might be otherwise implicit in the designations of "Owner" and "Pet" at the surface level which is far more interesting to me. I shall personally continue to hope this trend continues :) I also appreciate how Rhys is perceptive enough to notice the changes in Jasper. It seems like it should become obvious to him over time that something unusual is occurring. I do wonder what his reaction would be to knowing what was being done to Jasper. I am quite delighted that you have delved into the specific of Rhys's past pet. It does seem rather like this fact coupled with Aris's current modifications to his pet might have an interesting culmination--or even argument--between Rhys and Aris. Up to this point, it has been explored how good it feels to Jasper when Rhys is pleased. I am curious what a negative emotion (not necessarily directed at Jasper) might engender within Jasper. Backstory work is always welcome. Thus far, we have seen lots of scenes where Rhys and Jasper have been out amongst others. I am quite curious what measure of domestic interactions this absolute adoration might bring forth. And of course, to see how the gradual restoration of the silver river might provide an ongoing plot point. I absolutely tip my hat to you both for continuing to write all of this so well and work in lovely allusions. Your RPs must be really special to create such a vivid story. I am agog to see what happens next. I was quite delighted to see a new chapter appear and shall eagerly await your next installment Cheers and Thanks, ~Jayden

11/25/21, 3:20 AM
@Jayden Thank you so much for this kind, reflective commentary so far! Cuddle-switch and I really appreciate hearing what plot points and world building elements are speaking to you so far. We're definitely trying to put a lot of care into the lore of this world and explore the dynamics that these characters have to offer beyond just a D/s relationship. We'll definitely be aiming to keep that meaningful depth of character and relationships going! We're also definitely curious to explore some of the different sets of complications that we're slowly layering in and seeing how they interact! And you've given us some very interesting thoughts here about some scenes and plot points that might be interesting to push on further, some of which we've definitely got plans for and others that raise fun questions. From Cuddle-switch: "Yes, Rhys is noticing things, but he also wants this so badly that he's willing to avoid seeing things. I expect some up and downs there. As for the Coins, they can definitely be just as vulnerable as the rest of us, they just don't let on as much. Building in some of those vulnerabilities and showing Rhys being emotionally vulnerable hopefully shows that they're not unassailable. Also, doing this kind of detailed minor character development is new to me, and difficult, but I'm enjoying learning about it. Let's see what we come up with!" It's honestly a pleasure to collaborate with Cuddle-switch and write together, and I hope that shows. It's also a pleasure to hear that you're enjoying our writing. Thanks again! -- Time & Cuddle-switch
boi98229
11/23/21, 8:07 AM
@time.to.occur i agree completely with all the positive comments you have been receiving! i admit that i have what i consider a huge advantage over these other unfortunate readers. Since i didn't find your story until today, i already know i still have 6 more chapters all ready to read!! i figure that at your average publishing rate of 2 chapters per month, if i ration my reading to 3 chapters per month, i will still have about 4 months to be thrilled by this wonderfully enthralling story. The biggest problem with this plan is that since I already have an uncontrollable addiction to the characters, the plot, and all the intrigue (and sex to come?) in between, i expect i will finish the entire thing by sometime tomorrow. i think i might be in big trouble...

11/24/21, 4:28 AM
@boi98229 We're really glad you're enjoying the story so far and are so so flattered that you're trying to ration your way through it to keep the story going! cuddle-Switch says I should warn you that we posted most of what we already had written and from here on out, things might be a little slower because we're writing as we go. You're right that technically so far we've averaged a chapter ever two weeks! This also means though, that your feedback is especially welcome as we keep co-creating the world and story <3!

boi98229
11/24/21, 5:48 AM
@time.to.occur Perhaps i shouldn't reveal this as you may start to relax your creativity, but... i do have a fall-back plan! i have already checked and you still have several other stories i haven't yet read or at least haven't yet finished. The downfall there is that i might need you to start writing new chapters for those stories too! *The Little Black Death* is one of my all-time favorites. I found it quite optimistic as it seemed that with the help of the aliens, humans might actually find a way to get along with each other. ;)) Glad to see your response to my comment at *Wild Pansies in the Fae Court* indicating that you are already working on a sequel to that story.

11/25/21, 3:09 AM
@boi98229 What a pleasure to hear that you're enjoying those stories, too! I'll do my best to keep the writing coming, with Cuddle-switch's help! Thank you so much. You've named some of my favourites out of my own stories, too! ^^ If you run short of material, I think our tastes might align similarly -- you can always check out my favourited stories list in my profile!
11/25/21, 2:44 AM
Great Start! I hope that woman creature gets punished for being so rude and condescending! Maybe a lifetime as a human?
11/24/21, 11:47 PM
I like the concept. Since RedPed made the right comment about the story, and you mentioned you may want some point to where take this, I was thinking maybe you can turn his friend concept of feet into "is not gay since they are just my feet" or something like that, and make him do a footjob while thinking "this is just a massage to my good friend".... in any case, keep going in the path you think is best :3

11/25/21, 12:43 AM
hey man thanks for the feedback and i do like that idea, i already have a couple ideas on what to add in the next chapter but i think that could be a good idea to play around with @Udems
Anonymous
11/25/21, 12:23 AM
update ever?
11/24/21, 11:54 PM
loved it! very excited to read more!!
8/6/21, 12:35 PM
Yaaaaay! These two are so cute. Are you going to cross-list this series to GCS? It definitely fits there too.

8/7/21, 6:43 AM
@Dace I thought about that! Got to check how the cross-listing works and all, but I'd love to put this one (and maybe a few more) in the new site :)

11/24/21, 11:16 PM
@Dace what is GCS? I fucking love this series and would love to see more of it and more like

11/24/21, 11:38 PM
@Bear Gay Cupid Stories! It's the more romance-centered version of GSS. You can find it from the top menu where it says Gay Erotica Sites
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 11:20 PM
This one was great good pacing for a kinda shot story, and got the sexy bits just perfectly; I didn’t look at the pictures and it was still amazing
11/24/21, 10:54 PM
Thank you, mate!!
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 10:51 PM
It was short but I loved it