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11/24/21, 10:54 PM
Thank you, mate!!
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 10:51 PM
It was short but I loved it
11/24/21, 7:51 PM
Bear with me, everyone. This one is going to get weird.
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 2:12 PM
please let there be a sequel. or better yet, have this shake be sold near me.

11/24/21, 7:20 PM
I agree. <3 @james401
11/24/21, 6:26 PM
Such a rollercoaster of a plot ! Really likes how the story develops with them being super kinky and all but while not fucking, they still act like a normal bros. Thank you for the fast update !

11/24/21, 7:19 PM
@Sufan I'm glad you're liking it!
11/24/21, 12:11 PM
Just gets better and better

11/24/21, 7:19 PM
@Morph Thanks man!
Anonymous
11/24/21, 7:04 PM
Anymore 2 cum..er i mean, come ?
Nov 24, 2021
11/24/21, 5:37 PM
I didn't look at the links, but as I read it I couldn't help but be reminded of Hellraiser because of the Uncle Frank moniker. Reading through certain scenes lended themselves to me adding a "Come to Uncle Frank" like the actor in the movie did.

11/24/21, 6:43 PM
@New Guy in Town Interesting! And entirely a coincidence. I've never seen Hellraiser, and I haven't read much work by Clive Barker.
11/24/21, 6:24 PM
Not bad for a first go. It could use some edits to smooth out the flow and to transition between vignettes. I can see where you want to take this. Solid concept.

11/24/21, 6:37 PM
hey thanks for the feedback man i appreciate the advice@RedPed
Anonymous
11/24/21, 5:33 PM
I'm not a great writer but um curious is there plans to continue this wonderful series