Recent Comments

11/23/21, 6:27 AM
So hotttt.

11/24/21, 4:24 AM
@Jonanator thanks for always being one of our first and most constant readers! It's always nice to see that you've enjoyed the chapter ^^!

11/24/21, 6:07 AM
@time.to.occur You are very welcome. What can I say, I love a good story.
11/24/21, 5:11 AM
That was hot. Fucking loved it. Can't wait for more!
11/23/21, 11:24 AM
Continuing to enjoy this sexy story. Love how Jasper is being trained to be more submissive to Rhys.

11/24/21, 4:25 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! Really glad you're enjoying so far and thanks for taking the time to let us know! cuddle-Switch says, "It's my first time writing this type of mind control, but I'm having fun and am looking forward to sharing more."
boi98229
11/23/21, 6:55 AM
@time.to.occur i have to agree with Noam de Pluma's comments about a this world you have sketched out for us and the characters you have populated it with to date. Intriguing and enthralling. Can't add much to that and besides i'm off the read the next chapter! Just want to say thanks so much!!

11/24/21, 4:23 AM
@boi98229 Glad you're enjoying it so far and hope we can keep enthralling you! cuddle-Switch says "Thank you and you're welcome ;) Hope you enjoy the next chapters."
11/22/21, 6:31 PM
Wow, the medic's part is kind of surprised me, but overall it is still great ! i really like the part when they are in the kid's house, even it's make me giggling sometimes like i just read some fluff fanfiction. Honestly, i've been reading this site since 8 years ago even when this site still named as ncmc, and i've never giggling while read any story in this site before, so once again thank you !

11/22/21, 6:44 PM
@Sufan the story has an arc and it may look it is getting dark but trust me when i say, no one knows how this story ends :)

Cracker
11/23/21, 10:06 AM
Well the author might know how it ends… I hope t :-)@Jack Parker

11/24/21, 3:33 AM
@Cracker If not I need to see a shrink lol
Martin
11/24/21, 3:31 AM
Hi Dylan, I've changed the links in the story so that they're embedded in the text directly. Use 'edit' to see how it's done so you can do it yourself next time.
11/24/21, 2:40 AM
another fun chapter. been loving reading these.
Anonymous
11/23/21, 11:35 PM
i love this series so much!
11/23/21, 11:33 PM
so waiting for more
11/23/21, 11:01 PM
Fecking amazing! So hot and beautifully written