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11/23/21, 8:24 PM
Yeah! It's getting better and better! Can't wait for more sequels to cum. :P
Nov 1, 2021
11/23/21, 7:21 PM
All eight hard
11/23/21, 7:03 PM
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11/23/21, 4:31 AM
Too bad there's only two chapters of this gem. For anybody interested in erotic humiliation, this is fucking gold, buddy. I hope the guy who commissioned it decide to finish it. It's delicious.

Jockmorphr
11/23/21, 5:48 PM
@Plymouth58 I agree! the erotic humiliation in this story is great. It is one of the things I like most about @oddballs' stories. The physical changes are incredibly hot, especially when compounded with the behavioral changes that the subject can't stop from happening. Great story! Like everyone else I hope there will be more.
11/23/21, 3:23 PM
I really didn't have a problem with the way the story read to begin with. I could follow it just fine, it didn't seem to be a problem for me other than a few name error problems and you could figure those out pretty easy. I've seen far worse problems in other stories, but I could still follow along with those so I think it just depends on the person. Overall I really like the story as a whole and this was another great chapter in a mystery that I'm very interested in. Thank you for writing!
11/23/21, 12:47 PM
brilliant story!
11/23/21, 12:42 PM
Fantastic story! cant wait to see it continued. your work is sooooo good!!
ThatGayGuy
11/21/21, 5:48 AM
This was a hot story I'd love to see another chapter

11/23/21, 12:39 PM
@ThatGayGuy Thanks for the feedback! Not sure what another chapter would look like other then these two moving out and a new "couple" moving into the house to be changed.
11/23/21, 12:23 PM
Great ending. Always love it when the resistance is dialed up in stories like this!
11/23/21, 2:49 AM
Okay, I have been reading through all these short stories, and I do like where you're going with them, but you really need to stop and proofread them before you post. You have had a couple instances where you got the character names backwards, and one where you changed the point of view from third person to first person and back again. This can be a little jarring and make the stories a little harder to follow, so proofread a couple times before posting please. Otherwise, it's a good concept you have going and I would like to see where you go with these. Edit: To be honest, this one "indigo" was really the most difficult to read through.

Kods
11/23/21, 11:49 AM
@KnightStone Hey there, thanks for the reply. I proofread these and I have a beta reader, but I don’t think My beta-reader had time to go over this one. Regardless the onus is on me with that. And I have noticed a few typos in the others, which sucks because no matter how many times you re-read, mistakes still pop up. I will make sure I go back and fix any name errors. That’s a personal pet peevee of mine. Also for the perspective can you be more specific what you’re referring to? Most of the stories are from 3rd and 1st person. 3rd person being form the human’s point of view, 1st person being from the slime’s point of view. Because most of the slimes end up merging or taking over the humans the perspective changes. Also the perspective changes are denoted with horizontal line breaks. So, if you’re not referring to that, could you point me in the right direction. I just re-read through Indigo and while there were a few typos and lines I could’ve sharpened. There was nothing that confused me while reading through it. Can you clarify what made this the most difficult to read?

Kods
11/23/21, 12:05 PM
@Kods Edit: Should have clarified, I did also make those changes I mentioned to Indigo. Let me know if the story reads easier for you one they've been applied.