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3/5/25, 5:55 PM
Nice job! I think you’ve got an interesting party idea here. Look forward to more of the adventure.

3/5/25, 9:54 PM
@[hypnopaladin](/user/show/10058683) Thanks!!!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 7:29 PM
Ohhh, I love it! I'm really enjoying this story! Personally, I'd love to know what happened to actor Chis Pewter from Chapter 2 in a later chapter (or in a spinoff, maybe?), I loved how the deeper he went into the interview, the progressively dumber he got. It would be really hot to see him on the set of a sequel, or in a later movie. I imagine the effects would be quite pronounced then!
Anonymous
3/5/25, 11:11 AM
This was such a fun read. I enjoyed it! I’d love to read more~

3/5/25, 5:27 PM
@Anonymous Thanks for the feedback. I'm working on a Part 2, inspired by Cutlerfan's suggestion.
3/5/25, 4:40 PM
Another amazing episode! Thank you!
3/5/25, 3:03 PM
Glad to see a new chapter :)
3/5/25, 1:56 PM
This is so hot keep going!
3/5/25, 1:31 PM
I cant wait for part 2
3/5/25, 12:53 PM
Yes! Been waiting for more chapters
3/5/25, 2:11 AM
I knew from part one that you are an expert at building up sexual tension and excitement, and part two not only confirmed that, but it proved that you can write the sex just as amazingly as the build up. I adored every word of this, it was so worth the wait. So hot to see Pat accept how raunchy Brian is, and I'm so excited to see where things go from here!

3/5/25, 11:53 AM
@[KBlume](/user/show/10031073) Thank you for your kind words! I wanted to get into the meat of the story, as it were, relatively quickly, but I wanted to build the anticipation- there needed to be some preamble before I got to the sex! Pat's acceptance of Brian's raunchy side is not entirely organic- there's another force at work that is influencing him to embrace it. We'll get into that down the road- have patience!