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11/21/21, 4:49 PM
Great stories and imagination from Dylan. And great picture!
boi98229
11/21/21, 5:56 AM
Thanks for chapter 2 -- very enthralling! This sub school reminds me of a volunteer training course for subs in San Diego. It went on for a number of weeks, meeting once a week if i recall correctly, and each session covering one aspect of BDSM. Unfortunately i didn't hear about it until after its student roster was full and the course about to start. I wish there was something comparable where I am living now. I feel quite sure I have read this story already somewhere else. Have you already published it elsewhere? Thanks very much in any case. I enjoy this story enough to read it more than once, likely even more than twice! I do wish though that i didn't have to wait between chapters. I am not so good putting back beer, but i like to guzzle a good story.

11/21/21, 4:36 PM
@boi98229 Glad to have you on board! :) Keep in touch. I'll be positing new chapters regularly.
Nov 18, 2021
11/21/21, 4:20 PM
Super hot. Loving this and hoping for more!
11/21/21, 3:12 PM
Great story! Looking forward for the next chapters
11/21/21, 2:41 PM
"Security Cam"?? I'd like to see what this special cam has to show... :P :P Wow, the story is getting better and better!
11/21/21, 2:20 PM
A very well written intro with some intriguing hints about where things might go. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!
11/21/21, 2:15 PM
It's always exciting when I see another chapter to one of your stories has been added! This one continues to intrigue me. Thanks for keeping it going! Hoping to see more of both of your stories. And so glad to see you post again!
11/18/21, 5:42 PM
This is great! I had memories of the original reading some parts, the characters are all interesting and the build-up is unpecable! Could you please add the name of the POV characters? They were time I had no idea who was thinking what before several paragraphs. Was a bit confusing.

11/18/21, 8:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish agreed

11/18/21, 10:57 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Yeah, this chapter has been done for a while. I actually forgot I hadn't put it up here, and gave myself a small heart attack when I came to see how it was doing and couldn't find it. I was afraid someone was going to say that. I was trying to have the last line before the POV switch direct the reader to who was going to be next instead of breaking the pace of the story with "(Character) POV"s everywhere. Were their specific transitions that caused confusion, or did the idea just not work at all?

11/20/21, 9:14 PM
@BobbyBlobfish @darkblade2814 I made an edit to hopefully clear up the POV switches. I'd be grateful if you guys could go through this chapter again to see if the transitions are better now.

11/21/21, 2:09 PM
@Johntheedoe Sorry I took so long to answer. For some, it was easy to figure out who it was, but for exemple, the first switch was about the football team. Without precising who amongst the football team we were following. The fact that there is such a huge cast mean it's really easy to lose track of who's who and where. Thanks for the small edits! Really helps to no end. =)
11/21/21, 1:49 PM
Wow... must be a pretty powerful fruit punch... Can't wait to read more of it...
11/21/21, 1:00 PM
WOW!! I love this first part of the story! Many interesting hints that make my fantasy go crazy...

Dylan
11/21/21, 1:20 PM
@ChrisGER Thk you sir! I hope you will like and comment the events in the next chapters as well ! Dylan