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GruffBear
7/11/25, 6:19 PM
Ok, yes, the sex scenes with the father are hot as shit. However, there's no buildup to this, and it is impossible to believe that in a matter of minutes the dad becomes a cock hungry whore. It would be much more believable if the dad went under more slowly, rather than just simply becoming a bitch. Build up is everything--it's hard to cum without it because it's just a huge missing component of the story. Now if the father was a robot with a whore switch then yes, there could be a sudden personality replacement. But people don't work that way, especially the most repressed or in denial. However, I wrote about 1000 words leading up to the full-blown sex with the dad, and that seems to get me to cum at the money shot. You are an incredibly talented writer, and I would much prefer you writing about a slower transformation than myself because I'm not a talented writer. No reason to disagree or agree with what I've written, but I can't continue reading these kinds of stories that venture so far from reality as to become totally unbelievable.
4/20/25, 7:51 PM
Next part coming soon!

7/11/25, 5:16 PM
@[Sam Wilson](/user/show/10048195) Still waiting. Hope the next part comes soon.
7/11/25, 5:10 PM
I'm waiting for the next chapter.
7/11/25, 5:01 PM
Looking forward to a continuation!
7/11/25, 4:04 PM
Love to see where this is headed.
7/11/25, 3:29 PM
Love your superhero stories section. My favorite one is “Super Dude Gets Done.”
7/11/25, 12:27 PM
You outdo yourself, Jack! I read and reread your works of art.
Jul 8, 2025
DepressedRandomPerson
7/11/25, 12:05 PM
Guess the curse affected the men in the family as well.:rofl: Don't really like the racist elements , but even the story itself calls itself out on that and it affects both parties.
6/27/24, 2:37 PM
This is great. Such a good mix of horny and story. Cant wait for more!

6/30/24, 11:38 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) Hey Kyle, thanks for your comment! I appreciate it. Thanks for reading!

Anonymous
7/1/24, 12:04 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Hey. Where is the third part /:-)

7/11/25, 5:32 AM
@Anonymous Still brainstorming for it. Hoping to start writing it soon.
6/25/25, 6:15 AM
This is a great work, i will wait to see more of you

7/11/25, 5:31 AM
@[Pan2109](/user/show/10008961) Thank you! I'm still brainstorming part 3. I'm hoping to start writing it soon.