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11/19/21, 9:20 PM
AMAZING Story, I absolutely LOVE it!! It would be sooo cool if there would be another sequel.
11/19/21, 9:17 PM
Wow, that would be awesome if you could buy things like that... Thinking of it makes me horny...
11/19/21, 9:10 PM
Damn good, cant wait for the next one 🤤
11/18/21, 7:32 PM
The minute this is up on Amazon is the minute I will be buying myself a Christmas present. Yon Comet! Hail Gareth! Merry Christmas! PS what a blast if the launch day is solstice

11/19/21, 5:15 AM
@Relzad I wanted it to be up by now but I had some delays. Last minute proofreading and edits! Right now I'm thinking that because of Thanksgiving and Black Friday it'll likely go online the week after Thanksgiving. But, that's a guess right now. Thanks for your support!

Relzad
11/19/21, 9:21 AM
@Nocturne13 Perfection takes time, and I totally get that. Please do let us know the minute it does go live. You made Christmas last year with your gift. And I would love to read it again this Christmas with the revised bits and pieces. (feel free to teaser - Did you Work Ms C back into the mix?) that's one thread that left me hanging, maybe its for the "Reindeer mob". Good luck and Merry Christmas! Relz

11/19/21, 8:28 PM
@Relzad unfortunately the appearance of Mrs S which was originally in the epilogue was cut because it was a bit overloaded. Blitzen kind of took over... so you will see her again in the prologue of the Reindeer Mob.
11/19/21, 7:47 PM
Overjoyed to hear you are working on a sequel.

11/19/21, 8:27 PM
@Beaner Aww, thanks! I hope I can get a draft out soon.
11/19/21, 7:52 PM
so do I
11/19/21, 7:22 PM
this is a masterpiece ! the way that archie become the one that want it so much, without any hypnosis or drug, just because some body condition and some mind manipulation..this is so fresh and great ! thank you !
11/19/21, 6:31 PM
Fantastic fiction as ever

Dylan
11/19/21, 6:44 PM
@incaerau Thk u Sir
11/19/21, 4:29 PM
Aw shucks, a cliffhanger! I wonder if he'll be introduced to chastity later on? :D
11/19/21, 4:14 PM
I'm liking what you are doing a lot. You managed a way to balance the long term brainwashing domination (which can be a common dislike "moving too fast") and the instant dominance with a mind control flavor to it. Very sexy. Keep going and hope there's more to come.