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11/19/21, 1:12 AM
I do feel like this chapter is a conclusion, rather than something that begs to be on-going. I was impressed by the balance and sensitivity that the whole issue was handled with. This was a satisfying story to read (and super hot).
11/19/21, 12:17 AM
Great job! Very hot with the BDSM elements and also going into the psyche of the characters. You've got the start of something quite interesting here. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Tiny side note: maybe do a once-over before posting. Few misspellings and wrong words used but nothing a quick proofread can't fix! Well done! :)
11/18/21, 8:15 AM
Hot hot hot hot hot! I loved this chapter from start to finish! The subtle changes done to both Mitchell's and Dick's psyche, the physical changes, very well written and very well done! :D Looking forward to the next chapter!

Kods
11/18/21, 11:38 PM
Thank you, hopefully, the next chapters will keep your interest as well!
11/18/21, 10:57 PM
Looking forward to seeing where you’ll be taking this!
Ni
11/18/21, 10:06 PM
I wish that miss hamer stay with me in my house for a session tomorrow in my house with miss hamer with her uperskirt no tights Only flip flops
11/18/21, 9:23 PM
This is great ! At some point, it feels romantic yet still very hot ! Thank you for this story, really hope there will be more chapter in the future
11/18/21, 9:01 PM
Loved it near as much as Fall Of The Parker Brothers and probably will commission something. One thing: Wouldn't King Of The Bottoms be a better title?
11/18/21, 6:16 PM
I hope to see another chapter! reminds me of things i would have wanted to wish to happen if i had a magical genie. All the fun safe, weird things I'd want to do. 100% appreciate this story, in that id be the same way... wanting to try out the limits off what his powers could do with my own fantasies. knowing that it's done in a way where I couldn't be hurt in the long run! Hope you write more on this!!

11/18/21, 8:17 PM
@Jojojojojojo Thank you! i feel very similarly and that's my inspiration for writing this couple, haha. I've been putting more of their backstories/shenanigans on gay cupid stories if you want to give them a look! [Here's my most recent](https://www.gaycupidstories.com/series/show/10001328).
Oct 30, 2021
Lohengrin
11/17/21, 8:22 AM
This piece stands on its own merits as a really well written short story quite beyond its gay interest. Very well developed characters and believable plot, even with the fantasy element--and that's hard to do. How come this is not for sale on Kindle? It would be quite competitive with the drivel they generally peddle there, and frankly, it's better than anything I've paid good money for. TTFN, LOHENGRIN

Anonymous
11/18/21, 7:51 PM
@Lohengrin Thanks so much, you're very kind. I hadn't really considered putting this on Amazon for sale, but that's an interesting idea. I generally make them available without charge but if people would be willing to buy them, I'm OK with that. If you're interested, more stories are available @ https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com Thank you again and I'm so very glad you liked the story
Oct 30, 2021
Papa Werebear
11/18/21, 7:51 PM
Thanks so much, you're very kind. I hadn't really considered putting this on Amazon for sale, but that's an interesting idea. I generally make them available without charge but if people would be willing to buy them, I'm OK with that. If you're interested, more stories are available @ https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com Thank you again and I'm so very glad you liked the story