Recent Comments

Aaron
11/18/21, 4:12 PM
I found this story to be good at parts but other times it fell short. Many of the things said were not commands they were suggestions or musings like "And i know you want to" there is nothing to stop Mark from leaving the house, jumping on a plane and hiding out for a week. Knowing what is now in store for him there is 0 reason he wouldn't take that opportunity seeing as he is clearly super rich. Some of the sex content was great while other parts were brief and it honestly would have been better if those ones were left out. Its not a bad story it just seems like it was written with your dick in one hand not planning it out before hand. I'll be interested to see where the next chapter goes

11/19/21, 3:57 AM
@Aaron Mark was in fact ordered to wait for Terry to bring his next master to him. Going with what the stated effects of the drug are in the story, he would be forced to comply with that for at least a week - and Terry promised to return within 5 days.
Martin
11/19/21, 3:07 AM
This series has become a bit of a guilty pleasure for me. Revolting and very hot at the same time. Thank god it's only a fantasy, and a hot one at that!
11/17/21, 9:19 PM
Another hot story Martin. I hope you have plans to continue.

Martin
11/18/21, 6:31 AM
@Beaner I have a half-finished chapter for that series for a long time. Unfortunately, this series never saw too many readers, so I was a bit disappointed and never got around to finish that chapter. I had some great plans for the series, but if people aren't interested, my drive to write is suffering. Especially since on my normal day to day life, I struggle finding enough spare time to spend on writing. Right now I'm on vacation, which is really helping a lot :) But I'm really glad that you like that series! Thank you!

11/18/21, 7:42 PM
@Martin Well I only just found it, so maybe February was a bad time of year. I hope I can inspire you to return to it - but first enjoy your vacation. Someplace warm I hope!

Martin
11/19/21, 2:51 AM
@Beaner Thanks. We're in Thailand, it's warm all right, but it's raining way more than usual for this time of year. Not complaining though, we're having a great time, and I finally get the chance to write a bit :)
11/19/21, 12:43 AM
Absolutely love it. Everything here is so fun and sexy. I love how you build the world so well that your in-universe terms become extremely erotic. You've done an amazing job with developing the relationships for the reader to enjoy. Can't wait for more!

11/19/21, 2:10 AM
Ahhh, thanks for the glowing endorsement! I guess I never thought of it that way—that I could actually instil the readers with the concepts so they found them hot despite them not being real? And now I’m actively thinking about making sure I have that effect, haha. More world building coming soon… @Razz TFs
11/18/21, 6:56 PM
This was totally hot, I can't wait to see where it goes next. Thanks for writing!

Kods
11/18/21, 11:37 PM
Thank you, big compliment! I love Grow a Pair!

11/19/21, 1:28 AM
@Kods thanks, glad you're liking it! 👍🐻
11/19/21, 1:12 AM
I do feel like this chapter is a conclusion, rather than something that begs to be on-going. I was impressed by the balance and sensitivity that the whole issue was handled with. This was a satisfying story to read (and super hot).
11/19/21, 12:17 AM
Great job! Very hot with the BDSM elements and also going into the psyche of the characters. You've got the start of something quite interesting here. Looking forward to seeing where you go with it. Tiny side note: maybe do a once-over before posting. Few misspellings and wrong words used but nothing a quick proofread can't fix! Well done! :)
11/18/21, 8:15 AM
Hot hot hot hot hot! I loved this chapter from start to finish! The subtle changes done to both Mitchell's and Dick's psyche, the physical changes, very well written and very well done! :D Looking forward to the next chapter!

Kods
11/18/21, 11:38 PM
Thank you, hopefully, the next chapters will keep your interest as well!
11/18/21, 10:57 PM
Looking forward to seeing where you’ll be taking this!
Ni
11/18/21, 10:06 PM
I wish that miss hamer stay with me in my house for a session tomorrow in my house with miss hamer with her uperskirt no tights Only flip flops