Recent Comments

11/16/21, 7:00 PM
Really enjoying this story! i liked the way you worked the exposition in an entertaining way. The story is building nicely Fun read!

Martin
11/18/21, 6:28 AM
@absman420 Thank you, as always, your criticism means a lot to me. I always have the feeling that my language skills are lacking, I don't have nearly enough ways to express myself properly. Especially when it come to speaking like real person would... In my next chapter I plan to add Hooligan-like straight brickheads to my story but I don't think I can reproduce their way of talking properly... :(
Nov 1, 2021
11/18/21, 6:20 AM
more please!!!
Nov 18, 2021
Martin
11/18/21, 4:14 AM
Very promising start! Can't wait to see where this is heading! Also one of the perfect initial stories for the upcoming GayGearsStories site 😝
11/18/21, 3:05 AM
This series hits the perfect balance of sweet and squirmy for me! I love the seamless blend of mind-bending, literally addictive sex and cum with supportive relationships. It's a rare combo! Also, there aren't nearly enough stories out there with such in-depth world building. Kudos on creating a very hot, very creative setting! I'm glad we got to see more Johnny -- I'm not sure if I'm more obsessed with Seeders or Firecrackers as an erotic concept...

11/18/21, 3:39 AM
Coming from someone who’s written such an exceptional world and thought so deeply about it yourself, this means so much! Thank you! If there’s one thing I always love, it’s happy endings for everybody, and I think that plays into the blend of hypersexuality and fraternity here. Consummation (the world) is built to be a place where everyone can be safe, fulfilled, and happy, and I’ve been working on shaping it for over a year now. I’m glad it’s paying off. Also, I’m glad you’re into Firecrackers as much as Seeders—Firecrackers used to be something that would have been a lot less palatable to a general audience, but I feel like I’ve hit the jackpot (after like, a year of looking for it) with this magical addiction/irresistible domination combo. Again, means a lot from you, knowing how great your stories are! (By the way, once I’ve laid out Seeders and Firecrackers and their ins and outs and clarified things about Consummation more fully, if your obsession leads to inspiration, feel free to write a vignette or more and I’ll link it from a chapter of P&FB. This series will be going for a while…) @bluesuedewho
RedPen
11/17/21, 7:27 PM
Hot stories just being hot is one thing, but this series is pure epic. Absolutely love the episodic writing style this has developed (e.g. each chapter has become its own mini plotline in an overarching main plotline / has its own rising action, resolution, falling action). The plot is smoothly interwoven with great scenes, and the callbacks to earlier minor details show you have a clear picture in your mind of all the related elements. Not just hot, but a great read.

11/18/21, 3:14 AM
Thanks! I definitely couldn't have pulled this story off with lots of behind-the-scenes notes/plotting and help from editors. @RedPen
Anonymous
11/14/21, 9:07 PM
Amazing - love how obsessed the bros are with Sam's nips 🥰😍

11/18/21, 3:08 AM
Thanks! @
Carmelo
11/14/21, 1:56 AM
Really enjoying your story Kods! I hope we get to read more soon! I can't wait to read what Darius has in store for Nick!

Kods
11/16/21, 3:12 AM
Yes I hope to get back to this soon! I was working on a side project, but I'm just about done with that.

Carmelo
11/18/21, 12:50 AM
@Kods Thanks for replying! That means a lot to me!
11/17/21, 11:54 PM
A nice reversal of power!
11/17/21, 8:39 PM
need more
11/17/21, 7:47 PM
Thank you! im really happy you enjoyed!