Recent Comments

3/4/25, 8:54 PM
Hey. The creativity of the way you wrote the superbly unusual idea and approach is really fine. I rarely offer comments on stories. You've done a fine job. I appreciate the way that you let Alex exert his sub's control over his Dom in the last part of this chapter. I had also feared along the way that their underlying friendship would get lost, subsumed, in their explicit sub boy / Dom Man dynamic once it became explicit and acknowledged. I'm glad that you guarded against that. It enhanced the whole story the way you preserved it. (Thanks.) [As a writer here at GayCollar myself, I have one "process" question. I noted a "Collared – Part 59 (Expanded)" that appeared in the text, and another one that I think had the number 57 in it. Were they markers used so as to come back and expand a scene so as not to lose the pace as you wrote the basic story?]

Himbro
3/4/25, 9:03 PM
@[DikThik](/user/show/10003460) Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it! Abs yes to answer your question, I used those titles to keep track of continuity things but looks like I forgot to remove a couple before publishing. Thanks!

3/4/25, 9:31 PM
@[Himbro](/user/show/10021991) One more thing. Just wondering. Is the series concluded or yet to move forward? BTW, I can be reached at [ concuno.isme@outlook.com ]

Himbro
3/4/25, 9:53 PM
@[DikThik](/user/show/10003460) I'll be moving forward, it may be a bit before I can finish up the next chapter, hence the length on this one
3/4/25, 9:46 PM
Tyler ain’t coming back from that. Interesting to see where it goes now that his personality truly no longer exists
3/4/25, 7:31 PM
This was amazing!! Fantastic writing! I cannot wait to see how Mike will succumb.
3/4/25, 4:29 AM
Finally, a reverse reparative therapy story!

3/4/25, 5:06 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) I wasn't sure how guys would react to that theme, so thanks for the positive feedback. To me, this turnabout and poetic justice was a natural direction to take.

3/4/25, 7:30 PM
@Throne Oh it's definitely poetic justice. I wonder who needs the next treatment? Maybe Max has a visit by a very homophobic police officer/detective?
May 24, 2019
3/4/25, 5:20 AM
This is a concise wish-fulfillment story, with plenty of specifics to make it more believable. Nice that the guys ended up happy together.

3/4/25, 7:26 PM
@Throne Thanks for the positive comments.
Anonymous
3/4/25, 7:10 PM
Sot hot! Please more!!
3/4/25, 7:07 PM
This is such a a great series. Really liking the direction is continues to take
3/4/25, 6:24 PM
Super strong start to a series. Already hot and cute, and I love jocks with 'golden retriever energy'.
3/4/25, 5:48 PM
Every chapter just keeps getting better. And so regularly, I'm not just reading, I'm being in it. All my focus is on these words. These scenes. You make it feel so real, and that is a huge accomplishment. And thank you for keeping the rubber going and not just a step in Ethan's plans. Muscle rubber toys are so rare. I'm so eager to read how they move forward once this bet is over.
3/4/25, 5:21 PM
Over these 37,000 words or so You have carved out a space in my head, owning that spot. As I read i was deep in the story but another part of my brain was thinking about the praise I wanted to send back. Then we were back in the apartment and the writing had be feeling like I was intruding into an intimate moment I had no business being witness to. It was moving. And I questioned if I even had to right to. That's the result of powerful writing and life experiences highly relatable but wo that awesome tech. Thank you. I think i'd serve you in a heartbeat