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Martin
11/17/21, 6:41 AM
I mean... WTF? What an amazing story. There are two elements which are a bit distracting to me - the unbearable religious nonsense and the unrealistic cum Inflation - but it is a testimony to your amazing writing that these didn't lessen the enjoyment to read your story one bit. I'm lying on a public beach in my speedos, thinking it should be safe enough to read your Cupid story there. Wrong. I ended up with a huge dark spot on my bulged speedo for everyone to see. You bad boy, Soren! I almost forgot to continue reading this, thank you for reminding me in your other story. It would have been a real loss. This is so wholesome, so real, so empathic, so lovely, so cute. Thank you.

11/17/21, 7:24 AM
Ahhhh, this makes me so happy to hear! I understand the religious nonsense is unbearable, haha, and I don’t believe a word of it myself, but it’s because I wanted the story to be real and empathic that I included it and tried to be as authentic as possible. I’m glad that that authenticity shines through everywhere else. Seriously, this is such high praise! I was worried that because of the slow burn it wouldn’t keep people engaged. I’m glad it did anyway. Ah, I only wish there was more traffic to Cupid—but, hey, hopefully more people come from The Prince and the Frat Boys and see this! Either way, I’m proud of my work and glad that you appreciated it. Comments like these give me life enough to keep on writing and writing. (And I hope you enjoy P&FB 2 if you read it!) (Also, there’s a chapter 3 of this story, just so you know!) @Martin
11/17/21, 7:00 AM
great story throne not predicable at all. there aren't hardly enough reversal stories and i appreciate every single one. in fact the more the better.
11/17/21, 6:07 AM
Another great story. I loved the retro feel and agree with other comments about how the reader finds out about the manager's character. I look forward to the next story...
11/17/21, 4:46 AM
Thank god! I was afraid the series ended with that last cliffhanger. Any chance it could go on forever? Please?
11/17/21, 3:42 AM
Sexy. Sexy stuff.

11/17/21, 4:04 AM
Thanks! <3 Already working on chapter 3, and I hope to keep delivering. @Heru Kane
11/17/21, 3:22 AM
A good progression of the hypnosis but some of the suggestions seemed to be a bit of a leap for something as fundamental as sexual attraction. The actual sex seemed a little glossed over, not much in the mechanics like prostate stimulation or possible issues with Rusty being a virgin to anal sex...although you could argue that the MC was only average in size so it would not have been all that much of a stretch for Rusty.
11/17/21, 3:04 AM
Didn't the little brother's name change between story chapters? It was James then Jason. I was hoping there would be more anal in this last chapter. Overall it is a good story, just seemed a little too easy for the MC to be changed in such a short amount of time. Was kind of hoping it would be more spread out with more side characters joining in with more sex.
11/17/21, 2:52 AM
Somehow it seems too easy. The MC just falls into it like it was nothing. He was a virgin in the first chapter, at least it is assumed he was never penetrated before and suddenly he is able to take all this abuse. He is supposed to have been straight in the first chapter and now he is not even trying to resist. I can see having the urges programmed in but it would have been better if he tried to fight it somewhat. In the classic Domination of a Quarterback it was several chapters of the MC being raped and conditioned to start falling into acceptance. In a lot of the stories the MC is forced into a position where they are penetrated and find that their body is turned on against their will to enjoy it and they slowly get turned into the "slut" they were always made to be. Often it is when the attacker hits their prostate and makes them orgasm through the anal sex and hitting it to where they become addicted to the sensation and then their will crumbles to try and get that feeling back. In this it seems like too much too soon. It looks like it was his brother that helped orchestrate the turning of the MC, he seemed to know too much about the condition. The best friends seemed to be surprised but I would think as best friends they would have known something was wrong or be more skeptical of the scenario. This of course will not stop me from reading more, I love when a character orgasms hands free. Hands free implies they are completely at the mercy of the anal stimulation hitting them, a lack of control.
11/17/21, 2:45 AM
Just plain HOT!!!! Please keep going!!
11/17/21, 2:24 AM
Oh man, that was great. I think I missed this when it came out.