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11/17/21, 2:52 AM
Somehow it seems too easy. The MC just falls into it like it was nothing. He was a virgin in the first chapter, at least it is assumed he was never penetrated before and suddenly he is able to take all this abuse. He is supposed to have been straight in the first chapter and now he is not even trying to resist. I can see having the urges programmed in but it would have been better if he tried to fight it somewhat. In the classic Domination of a Quarterback it was several chapters of the MC being raped and conditioned to start falling into acceptance. In a lot of the stories the MC is forced into a position where they are penetrated and find that their body is turned on against their will to enjoy it and they slowly get turned into the "slut" they were always made to be. Often it is when the attacker hits their prostate and makes them orgasm through the anal sex and hitting it to where they become addicted to the sensation and then their will crumbles to try and get that feeling back. In this it seems like too much too soon. It looks like it was his brother that helped orchestrate the turning of the MC, he seemed to know too much about the condition. The best friends seemed to be surprised but I would think as best friends they would have known something was wrong or be more skeptical of the scenario. This of course will not stop me from reading more, I love when a character orgasms hands free. Hands free implies they are completely at the mercy of the anal stimulation hitting them, a lack of control.
11/17/21, 2:45 AM
Just plain HOT!!!! Please keep going!!
11/17/21, 2:24 AM
Oh man, that was great. I think I missed this when it came out.
11/17/21, 2:01 AM
Hot chapter!! please update more often, and write more gore sex scene!! I love tentacle sex scene in this series. Make it more!
mic
11/17/21, 12:55 AM
best story ever, fully tricked, great idea work,thanks ,please more of the guys and rooms
nycboot
11/17/21, 12:39 AM
Interesting start. Keep it up! (pun intended)
11/17/21, 12:06 AM
This was a great ending! Loved the reveal of the Manager's more demonic side, and the ever-creepy horror that next year, this will all happen again...and again...no one does sexy scares like you, Hypnothrill!
11/16/21, 10:53 PM
What a perfect fucking story -- love this one, can't believe it's been 10 years. One of very few where a guy cums just looking at himself in the mirror.
11/16/21, 3:35 PM
Gahhh I just absolutely love this series. The scenes with Robin and Isaac are so sweet while being amazingly lewd and hot. Gotta say, the build up to Robin giving Isaac a full load is getting me excited. Hell, at this point, same for Isaac to Gabe. Also, it looks like we're working towards my FAVORITE solution to a love triangle situation!! I was wondering if Gabe would be Isaac's fairy gay mother and then poof away, but I like this direction *way* more. I looooved them chatting in the jacuzzi too. Lots of good character building for the friend group. Curious if there's going to be a conflict/confrontation at any point with Jonny and Chrissy before everyone leaves for the night.

11/16/21, 10:17 PM
Comments like these make me feel so affirmed in my ability to write! I’m glad you love it, and that the build-up is going well. If there’s anything I want it’s to invest readers into my characters. You’ve also given me some fun ideas… I’m looking forward to implementing them! I think these characters will end up showing up more often than just this birthday party, after all. @Razz TFs
Jul 30, 2020
Anonymous
11/16/21, 9:18 PM
That was fun and I can't wait to read about the first date!