Recent Comments

11/15/21, 10:58 PM
Yes...thought it an interesting take on a familiar theme. Also look forward to more...how the victims will return the 'favor.' Just hope the writer doesn't have them go over the deep end so to speak...I see so many stories that start out great , but then they get violent and just...well there's enough of that in real life...don't care for it in my fantasies...whether my stories or someone elses. Keep up the good work.
11/15/21, 10:46 PM
honestly would love to see the parker dad get taken down next.
boi98229
11/15/21, 7:43 AM
i love this story! it has so much potential but has just whetted my appetite for more! More please! Please, Sir, may i have more?

11/15/21, 9:11 PM
@boi98229 I will provide! I'm sure you'll enjoy what's to come.
11/15/21, 1:24 AM
more please ! husband to master is a huge turn on for me !

11/15/21, 9:10 PM
@Sili Glad to have you on board and that it's up your alley!
11/15/21, 8:26 PM
I really hate anonymous and critical comments. Not at all constructive and really petty. I liked the story and I find enjoyment in reading new expressions of a theme. Also love the name Trotskisaurus!
11/15/21, 2:42 PM
This was such a fun ride!!! I loved the world-building; I loved the banter and how you built up their relationship; I loved Will, just, because he’s Will, lol, this is my first glimpse of him (unless he was the guy when Derek gets turned into a cocksleeve); I loved the subtle homoeroticism everywhere which really kept the tempo up. Also, the little touches are so interesting! Do you have a background in French? You seem to know how much they care about the accent. And I adore the physics—dimensional travel limited by the speed of light, the idea that extra dimensional art has cool symmetries we can’t see… And of course, how Derek analysed his own feelings and understood why Razz wasn’t manipulating him. This is so cute and feels like a really truly *gay* romance.

11/15/21, 7:17 PM
@Soren Fitz ahhh thank you! yes, Will did have a "cameo" in the Cocksleeve story. i do have a degree in french and studied abroad in paris. i don't get to use those skills IRL too often so, oops, it's leaking into my writing! and thanks for nerding out with me on the physics. i actually have all sorts of headcanons for how razz's magic works in this universe. im trying to find little windows in the stories to trickle those details in.
11/15/21, 6:48 PM
Loved this hope to see more!
Martin
3/22/19, 7:03 AM
So disgusting - and hot. Damn you! ;)

Anonymous
11/15/21, 5:45 PM
@Martin
11/15/21, 12:42 PM
have been waiting for this to be released and it didn't disappoint. great story so far and keen to see where you go from here with it. nice mix between plot and sex. curious if tyler gets a mention again now he is free from his poorly worded curse.

11/15/21, 3:55 PM
Thanks! I have notes on Tyler's fate, but they aren't important to the main plot. I'll see if there's a logical place to slip a mention of Tyler in future chapters. @Ganymedes
11/15/21, 6:12 AM
bro?

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
BRO. @Tkhon