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11/15/21, 2:50 PM
The fun of discovery here is lovely! I liked how you described his new experiences as an incubus, and how he began to adjust to it out of need and hunger. Life as a sex fiend will certainly be interesting, with its differing daily demands from being a human!

Martin
11/16/21, 3:01 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you so much Soren! I think this is a criminally underexplored viewpoint, with most stories putting their focus on the incubus's victims only... never even seeing the other side of the coin! I have so many ideas which want to come out, I just can't type fast enough and I struggle to find the time. But I'm really happy that you and so many others like to share this fantasy with me 😊
11/16/21, 1:19 AM
Sounds like Sammy is going to take over our narrator's harem of jocks. I don't see Sammy bottoming ever again. He plans to corrupt more men with his cock to bring them all pleasure. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to the next hard on.
11/16/21, 1:07 AM
hottest chapter yet,, Keep them coming cuz Charlie deserves to fuck his teacher and get fucked by him.
Anonymous
11/15/21, 11:47 PM
This was really hot. I like the whole best friend slowly betraying the other aspect of it. I like how it starts off with Will slowly becoming more and more controlling. I thought that was really well done. Hope to read more of your writing in the future.
11/15/21, 10:58 PM
Yes...thought it an interesting take on a familiar theme. Also look forward to more...how the victims will return the 'favor.' Just hope the writer doesn't have them go over the deep end so to speak...I see so many stories that start out great , but then they get violent and just...well there's enough of that in real life...don't care for it in my fantasies...whether my stories or someone elses. Keep up the good work.
11/15/21, 10:46 PM
honestly would love to see the parker dad get taken down next.
boi98229
11/15/21, 7:43 AM
i love this story! it has so much potential but has just whetted my appetite for more! More please! Please, Sir, may i have more?

11/15/21, 9:11 PM
@boi98229 I will provide! I'm sure you'll enjoy what's to come.
11/15/21, 1:24 AM
more please ! husband to master is a huge turn on for me !

11/15/21, 9:10 PM
@Sili Glad to have you on board and that it's up your alley!
11/15/21, 8:26 PM
I really hate anonymous and critical comments. Not at all constructive and really petty. I liked the story and I find enjoyment in reading new expressions of a theme. Also love the name Trotskisaurus!
11/15/21, 2:42 PM
This was such a fun ride!!! I loved the world-building; I loved the banter and how you built up their relationship; I loved Will, just, because he’s Will, lol, this is my first glimpse of him (unless he was the guy when Derek gets turned into a cocksleeve); I loved the subtle homoeroticism everywhere which really kept the tempo up. Also, the little touches are so interesting! Do you have a background in French? You seem to know how much they care about the accent. And I adore the physics—dimensional travel limited by the speed of light, the idea that extra dimensional art has cool symmetries we can’t see… And of course, how Derek analysed his own feelings and understood why Razz wasn’t manipulating him. This is so cute and feels like a really truly *gay* romance.

11/15/21, 7:17 PM
@Soren Fitz ahhh thank you! yes, Will did have a "cameo" in the Cocksleeve story. i do have a degree in french and studied abroad in paris. i don't get to use those skills IRL too often so, oops, it's leaking into my writing! and thanks for nerding out with me on the physics. i actually have all sorts of headcanons for how razz's magic works in this universe. im trying to find little windows in the stories to trickle those details in.