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11/15/21, 12:58 PM
Another excellent chapter!
Martin
11/15/21, 8:54 AM
I don't think the tag 'no-sex' is really appropriate here... Also remember that the whole series is inheriting all tags from all stories. Sure you want to keep that tag?
John
11/15/21, 8:52 AM
I expected that. He let Sammy keep a lot of autonomy, but then broke Eli and John. I'm actually kind of sad to see this ending. I was hoping Sammy would stay his boy toy slut.
11/15/21, 1:45 AM
So hot. I love the backstory added via Chad learning about being an incubus via a website. Chad figuring out his powers and what he can do with them in the moment was great, too. I'm looking forward to more of his adventures and transformations into various hot men.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@Proteus Yeah, I tried to put myself into his shoes and went from there. Reading instructions from a site (which he's only scanning, as most people would) was another way to explain the boring details... while leaving enough room for him to learn by doing and being surprised every now and then, too. I really love the idea to see an unsuspecting, somewhat clumsy guy being thrown into this situation...
Oct 30, 2021
Anonymous
11/15/21, 12:49 AM
this was so well written. i really enjoyed it

11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@ Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
11/15/21, 4:21 AM
I really like how this one depicted the mind control and Blake's sudden sense of devotion to his new God. I do think the story has a few pacing issues, however; it takes quite a while for Blake to wander into the diner, and then things speed up so much that the introduction of Sean feels very abrupt. I actually had to reread that part and make sure I hadn't missed something.

11/15/21, 6:36 AM
@Hypnothrill Thank you. I wanted the journey to be slow, because I figured I couldn't sustain the excitement of the premise once it had blown its load, so to speak. I probably over-extended the walk to the diner.
11/14/21, 3:19 PM
This is great! loving the story

Martin
11/15/21, 6:34 AM
@Razz TFs That's great to hear, nothing is more rewarding than knowing that there are people who enjoy my stories. I would love if some of you were to lose some of their protein while reading it... :D
11/14/21, 12:58 PM
really enjoying this so far. looking forward to seeing where you go with this

Martin
11/15/21, 6:32 AM
@KnightStone Me too :) I'm glad that you like it!
Willie Cici
11/15/21, 4:52 AM
Great story, Martin! I can't wait to see where this goes. You can do a lot with an incubus.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:31 AM
@Willie Cici Yes, that scenario has a lot of potential for all kinds of hot events and scenes, I hope I can make something worthwhile out of it. I hope you like the second chapter I've published yesterday. Currently I'm on the third chapter, which starts quite different from what you'd expect (I hope). And this praise coming from you, Willie, means a lot to me!
12/26/18, 10:39 PM
Thanks! sexdroid012 :) Thank you very much for your coment :3 I'm glad to see that there are people who like my story, I was afraid that this was a fetish (Kaa and Mowgli) very strange and with little acceptance. I hope you enjoyed it a lot. And I hope my writing in English is good. Any comment? Something to comment? Suggestions, advice, or things like that. I wish we could! I would gladly send you to Kaa to become a happy and mindnless slave ;) And I also. I would so much like to be Mowgli!

DBin
11/15/21, 3:33 AM
@Hypno-Tales I have a snake/hypno fetish so this really suited my needs! Please write more!

11/15/21, 5:30 AM
@DBin I'm on it. :) Unfortunately I have had health problems that have delayed new projects and stories, but I definitely intend to write more. Thank you very much for your comment, it encourages me to write.