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Oct 30, 2021
Anonymous
11/15/21, 12:49 AM
this was so well written. i really enjoyed it

11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@ Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
11/15/21, 4:21 AM
I really like how this one depicted the mind control and Blake's sudden sense of devotion to his new God. I do think the story has a few pacing issues, however; it takes quite a while for Blake to wander into the diner, and then things speed up so much that the introduction of Sean feels very abrupt. I actually had to reread that part and make sure I hadn't missed something.

11/15/21, 6:36 AM
@Hypnothrill Thank you. I wanted the journey to be slow, because I figured I couldn't sustain the excitement of the premise once it had blown its load, so to speak. I probably over-extended the walk to the diner.
11/14/21, 3:19 PM
This is great! loving the story

Martin
11/15/21, 6:34 AM
@Razz TFs That's great to hear, nothing is more rewarding than knowing that there are people who enjoy my stories. I would love if some of you were to lose some of their protein while reading it... :D
11/14/21, 12:58 PM
really enjoying this so far. looking forward to seeing where you go with this

Martin
11/15/21, 6:32 AM
@KnightStone Me too :) I'm glad that you like it!
Willie Cici
11/15/21, 4:52 AM
Great story, Martin! I can't wait to see where this goes. You can do a lot with an incubus.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:31 AM
@Willie Cici Yes, that scenario has a lot of potential for all kinds of hot events and scenes, I hope I can make something worthwhile out of it. I hope you like the second chapter I've published yesterday. Currently I'm on the third chapter, which starts quite different from what you'd expect (I hope). And this praise coming from you, Willie, means a lot to me!
12/26/18, 10:39 PM
Thanks! sexdroid012 :) Thank you very much for your coment :3 I'm glad to see that there are people who like my story, I was afraid that this was a fetish (Kaa and Mowgli) very strange and with little acceptance. I hope you enjoyed it a lot. And I hope my writing in English is good. Any comment? Something to comment? Suggestions, advice, or things like that. I wish we could! I would gladly send you to Kaa to become a happy and mindnless slave ;) And I also. I would so much like to be Mowgli!

DBin
11/15/21, 3:33 AM
@Hypno-Tales I have a snake/hypno fetish so this really suited my needs! Please write more!

11/15/21, 5:30 AM
@DBin I'm on it. :) Unfortunately I have had health problems that have delayed new projects and stories, but I definitely intend to write more. Thank you very much for your comment, it encourages me to write.
11/15/21, 3:42 AM
Amazing chapter. Well worth the wait and the length didn't bother me (giggity). I like your Chekov's gun finally getting fired. Tyler is an interesting character. Sure, he was an asshole, but you made him relatable with his wanting to see his parents and being unable to. And honestly, the sex between him and Sam was pretty hot, especially after Sam made his questionable edit. Sam is always getting in his own way with his edits, although his last one did get him closer to learning more about the black suits. Speaking of, the black suits are intriguing. It looks like the old dude is the leader of them. And maybe that old man and the shawl brigade are enemies? I don't know where that is going to go, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Most especially, I like that Marc has become the savior of Sam and Gabe. Marc having the willpower to overcome the influence of Tyler's texts was brilliant, and I'm glad that Sam and Gabe brought him into the editing the textbook club. And really, I just like how wholesome Marc is. He's adorable, and I just want to cuddle him like a big ol' teddy bear. Great work. I'm excited to read more when you have time to continue. By all means, take your time. Your writing is worth the wait.

11/15/21, 4:25 AM
Thank you! I'm glad the slow-burn plot stuff is coming through! No spoilers, but you're definitely on to something... More soon! I have a very rough draft of the next chapter. Maybe early next month? @Proteus
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:18 AM
Kind of in love with how slutty Sam is becoming

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
This story has changed a lot since the first idea, but Sam being an (ethical) slut for well-hung gay guys has always been a key feature! @
11/15/21, 3:17 AM
I LOVE this so fucking much

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
Thanks! @revenge88fics
Anonymous
11/15/21, 2:02 AM
Incredibly wholesome ending! 10/10!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
I never expected to be writing smut, much less smut with wholesome endings! @