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11/14/21, 10:15 PM
I just payd fo it, but tomorrow is a holyday here in brazil, so maybe i will only ready it on tursday

screamingmoist
11/15/21, 1:33 PM
thanks for picking up a copy! @darkblade2814

11/15/21, 1:39 PM
@screamingmoist the payment was recieved today, so I already read it , it was good, but 3 is still may favorite, bur 4 is still pretty good

screamingmoist
11/15/21, 3:47 PM
I've actually heard that about #3 from several people It's still surprising to me how even though it's a shared world, each collection ends up with its own tone that even I don't notice until I'm putting them all together @darkblade2814
Anonymous
11/15/21, 2:22 PM
Predictable!!!

11/15/21, 3:30 PM
That was a harsh judgement from Anonymous. I enjoyed it
11/15/21, 12:58 PM
Another excellent chapter!
Martin
11/15/21, 8:54 AM
I don't think the tag 'no-sex' is really appropriate here... Also remember that the whole series is inheriting all tags from all stories. Sure you want to keep that tag?
John
11/15/21, 8:52 AM
I expected that. He let Sammy keep a lot of autonomy, but then broke Eli and John. I'm actually kind of sad to see this ending. I was hoping Sammy would stay his boy toy slut.
11/15/21, 1:45 AM
So hot. I love the backstory added via Chad learning about being an incubus via a website. Chad figuring out his powers and what he can do with them in the moment was great, too. I'm looking forward to more of his adventures and transformations into various hot men.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@Proteus Yeah, I tried to put myself into his shoes and went from there. Reading instructions from a site (which he's only scanning, as most people would) was another way to explain the boring details... while leaving enough room for him to learn by doing and being surprised every now and then, too. I really love the idea to see an unsuspecting, somewhat clumsy guy being thrown into this situation...
Oct 30, 2021
Anonymous
11/15/21, 12:49 AM
this was so well written. i really enjoyed it

11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@ Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
11/15/21, 4:21 AM
I really like how this one depicted the mind control and Blake's sudden sense of devotion to his new God. I do think the story has a few pacing issues, however; it takes quite a while for Blake to wander into the diner, and then things speed up so much that the introduction of Sean feels very abrupt. I actually had to reread that part and make sure I hadn't missed something.

11/15/21, 6:36 AM
@Hypnothrill Thank you. I wanted the journey to be slow, because I figured I couldn't sustain the excitement of the premise once it had blown its load, so to speak. I probably over-extended the walk to the diner.
11/14/21, 3:19 PM
This is great! loving the story

Martin
11/15/21, 6:34 AM
@Razz TFs That's great to hear, nothing is more rewarding than knowing that there are people who enjoy my stories. I would love if some of you were to lose some of their protein while reading it... :D
11/14/21, 12:58 PM
really enjoying this so far. looking forward to seeing where you go with this

Martin
11/15/21, 6:32 AM
@KnightStone Me too :) I'm glad that you like it!