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11/15/21, 12:42 PM
have been waiting for this to be released and it didn't disappoint. great story so far and keen to see where you go from here with it. nice mix between plot and sex. curious if tyler gets a mention again now he is free from his poorly worded curse.

11/15/21, 3:55 PM
Thanks! I have notes on Tyler's fate, but they aren't important to the main plot. I'll see if there's a logical place to slip a mention of Tyler in future chapters. @Ganymedes
11/15/21, 6:12 AM
bro?

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
BRO. @Tkhon
11/15/21, 5:51 AM
i literally came 3 times reading this story. ... I do hope theres a happy ending that ends with them as a throuple! i feel bad digging into the specifics because others will do a much better job than me, but i want to say its a fun balance of fun, magic, plot and fun. and while your characters might get bossy or whatever its always for the better and no one seems cruel. though i hope crop tops come back!

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
Thanks! No spoilers, but there's a happy ending planned for all three characters. I'm glad the balance of different elements worked! @Thexshxboi
11/14/21, 10:15 PM
I just payd fo it, but tomorrow is a holyday here in brazil, so maybe i will only ready it on tursday

screamingmoist
11/15/21, 1:33 PM
thanks for picking up a copy! @darkblade2814

11/15/21, 1:39 PM
@screamingmoist the payment was recieved today, so I already read it , it was good, but 3 is still may favorite, bur 4 is still pretty good

screamingmoist
11/15/21, 3:47 PM
I've actually heard that about #3 from several people It's still surprising to me how even though it's a shared world, each collection ends up with its own tone that even I don't notice until I'm putting them all together @darkblade2814
Anonymous
11/15/21, 2:22 PM
Predictable!!!

11/15/21, 3:30 PM
That was a harsh judgement from Anonymous. I enjoyed it
11/15/21, 12:58 PM
Another excellent chapter!
Martin
11/15/21, 8:54 AM
I don't think the tag 'no-sex' is really appropriate here... Also remember that the whole series is inheriting all tags from all stories. Sure you want to keep that tag?
John
11/15/21, 8:52 AM
I expected that. He let Sammy keep a lot of autonomy, but then broke Eli and John. I'm actually kind of sad to see this ending. I was hoping Sammy would stay his boy toy slut.
11/15/21, 1:45 AM
So hot. I love the backstory added via Chad learning about being an incubus via a website. Chad figuring out his powers and what he can do with them in the moment was great, too. I'm looking forward to more of his adventures and transformations into various hot men.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@Proteus Yeah, I tried to put myself into his shoes and went from there. Reading instructions from a site (which he's only scanning, as most people would) was another way to explain the boring details... while leaving enough room for him to learn by doing and being surprised every now and then, too. I really love the idea to see an unsuspecting, somewhat clumsy guy being thrown into this situation...
Oct 30, 2021
Anonymous
11/15/21, 12:49 AM
this was so well written. i really enjoyed it

11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@ Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!