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Anonymous
11/15/21, 2:02 AM
Incredibly wholesome ending! 10/10!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
I never expected to be writing smut, much less smut with wholesome endings! @
11/15/21, 12:18 AM
I was worried for a bit there but the ending was great!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
Oh thanks! Nutiper suggested "happy ending" as a tag to let readers know that Tyler doesn't win here. @Cutlerfan
11/14/21, 11:46 PM
It was so worth the wait to finally see Sam getting his brains fucked out... the entire chapter was super hot, and I loved how long it was! I also loved the little bit about Milo being Marc's dad, that was such a sexy and funny easter egg! Now that Sam already had Tyler's magic dick, I can't wait to see when he will finally hop on Marc's magic dick too. I have a feeling that Marc's magic and talent for fucking might be even better than Tyler's. Cheers man, can't wait for more

11/15/21, 4:19 AM
Thanks! I'm glad the extra time spent on this chapter was worthwhile. Gabe's the main star of the next chapter, but Marc is still around to tease Sam. @Elmara
Anonymous
11/14/21, 8:10 PM
This was such a fun and wild new installment. Lowkey disappointed that we didn't get to see Gabe bottom. Overall, Gabe's lucked out a lot more than Sam when it comes to unintended side-effects or misfires of the edits. I kinda want him to get some sort of comeuppance the way Sam has lol. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for all the characters!

11/15/21, 4:17 AM
Thanks! Both guys have had unexpected ripples from edits, we just see more from Sam. And Sam's pretty pleased with most of the side-effects so far, or he'd find ways to change them. @
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
Another excellent chapter! The deftness of the writing in the last scene really impresses me. Sam and Gabe chilling for once in bathrobes and Sam acknowledging Marc as his friend was really sweet. And well-paced after all of the hot sex earlier in the chapter. And I loved that Tyler, mentioned in passing in one of the first few chapters, came back into the story. He was such a lazy, hot d-bag. And I loved that Marc had to help Sam and Gabe out in order to resist the spell of Tyler’s dick.

11/15/21, 4:16 AM
Thanks! Credit where credit is due -- Nutiper wrote a lot of the last scene. @MonsterMash62
Anonymous
11/14/21, 2:30 PM
woohoo! so hyped to get to continue this! youve made something great here man!

11/15/21, 4:09 AM
Thanks! Couldn't have done it without help from editors and beta readers! @
11/14/21, 10:50 AM
Definitely worth the wait!

11/15/21, 4:08 AM
Oh, thanks! We definitely put a lot of work into it! Hopefully the next chapter will come sooner. @italianstalian1987
11/13/21, 12:32 AM
Just read this on MC Stories. Its super hot. I think the obliviousness of things in this is what I super enjoy. Though the first person perspective of the sub is not something I normally want there is something here that makes it fun. (Maybe because even as we are following the sub I still think of the hypnotist as the 'big main' - I don't know, all I know is that its hot. lol) The fact that he goes from Mr Creepy to Master in a sort of slow but fast passed way is part of it. As is the whole "I know brother is bobbing up and down on something but I am not sure what it means" element. I also super like the nature of Vincente and his slow hypnotizing of all those dudes who like insult him and such. I know we don't see his POV but at the same time I can imagine the fun and such he is having making dudes into good boys. Like Ryan, I would totally enjoy seeing the scenes of Ryan being a good boy. I do wish there was some rimming. Especially if their is a disconnect between what is going on and what they think is going on. (So I do have to admit I didn't get all the way through on the reading cause things distracted me. It was that hot. Going to have to read it some more. lol)

11/14/21, 5:56 PM
@Heru Kane I've tried writing in third-person before and it didn't go nearly as well. I find it much easier to write from the sub's perspective where you don't get any insight into what the hypnotist is doing or thinking. It's possible I could still write in third-person in a way that avoids describing the hypnotist too much, but I definitely find it harder. That might just be lack of practice, mind you. As for rimming, I know a lot of tops enjoy it, but I've never gotten into that...to me, it just seems gross, so I have a hard time describing it in a positive way. I should probably read a few stories where the top rims the bottom and see if I can get better at writing that. Of course, because I find it gross, I have no problems having the bottom rimming the top. I've already got at least one such scene planned, but I might make it two...haven't decided yet what Ryan and Vicente will be doing together, so I might add something there.

11/15/21, 2:35 AM
@RobinHood70 That's all cool! Honestly, I just wanted you to know that this was fascinating and fun and sexy. All three chapters to be honest were great, though in slightly different ways. The set up is fascinating and fun and sexy. Like REALLY sexy. Like enjoy ti a bunch of times sexy. Also a hypnotist that sets it up so that the guys he likes finds serving him to be hot is super hot. And yeah, Ryan is an interesting character. The few scenes with him were cool. Also I get it, not everyone is the same, so yeah, it is what it is. There was enough fun in this that even lacking the rimming stuff I love the story here was fun, very fun!) I just wanted you to know that I super enjoyed it. It was sexy set of stories.
11/14/21, 11:11 PM
I already told you I reread this earlier, but I just had to leave a comment to express how much I loved your description of Seeders and what the "pregnancy" terms mean in this world. You manage to pack in so much fun along with intriguing world-building!

11/14/21, 11:50 PM
I’m really happy about this! I’ve worked hard in this world for a long time and I’m glad it shows—and that it’s hot, too. I’m glad I’m keeping it fun! @Razz TFs
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
As always, your transformations are so clever and fun! You didn't drag it out or make it overly repetitive; their dynamic really helped keep it fresh the whole time. And I enjoyed the times that you waxed romantic on their relationship dynamic; it really upped the romance factor of the story. This was wonderful!

11/14/21, 11:14 PM
@Soren Fitz you're too sweet!! and i can't help but fawn over their relationship. i'm super excited to post the "conclusion" of this little episode at the end of the month