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11/15/21, 3:42 AM
Amazing chapter. Well worth the wait and the length didn't bother me (giggity). I like your Chekov's gun finally getting fired. Tyler is an interesting character. Sure, he was an asshole, but you made him relatable with his wanting to see his parents and being unable to. And honestly, the sex between him and Sam was pretty hot, especially after Sam made his questionable edit. Sam is always getting in his own way with his edits, although his last one did get him closer to learning more about the black suits. Speaking of, the black suits are intriguing. It looks like the old dude is the leader of them. And maybe that old man and the shawl brigade are enemies? I don't know where that is going to go, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Most especially, I like that Marc has become the savior of Sam and Gabe. Marc having the willpower to overcome the influence of Tyler's texts was brilliant, and I'm glad that Sam and Gabe brought him into the editing the textbook club. And really, I just like how wholesome Marc is. He's adorable, and I just want to cuddle him like a big ol' teddy bear. Great work. I'm excited to read more when you have time to continue. By all means, take your time. Your writing is worth the wait.

11/15/21, 4:25 AM
Thank you! I'm glad the slow-burn plot stuff is coming through! No spoilers, but you're definitely on to something... More soon! I have a very rough draft of the next chapter. Maybe early next month? @Proteus
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:18 AM
Kind of in love with how slutty Sam is becoming

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
This story has changed a lot since the first idea, but Sam being an (ethical) slut for well-hung gay guys has always been a key feature! @
11/15/21, 3:17 AM
I LOVE this so fucking much

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
Thanks! @revenge88fics
Anonymous
11/15/21, 2:02 AM
Incredibly wholesome ending! 10/10!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
I never expected to be writing smut, much less smut with wholesome endings! @
11/15/21, 12:18 AM
I was worried for a bit there but the ending was great!

11/15/21, 4:20 AM
Oh thanks! Nutiper suggested "happy ending" as a tag to let readers know that Tyler doesn't win here. @Cutlerfan
11/14/21, 11:46 PM
It was so worth the wait to finally see Sam getting his brains fucked out... the entire chapter was super hot, and I loved how long it was! I also loved the little bit about Milo being Marc's dad, that was such a sexy and funny easter egg! Now that Sam already had Tyler's magic dick, I can't wait to see when he will finally hop on Marc's magic dick too. I have a feeling that Marc's magic and talent for fucking might be even better than Tyler's. Cheers man, can't wait for more

11/15/21, 4:19 AM
Thanks! I'm glad the extra time spent on this chapter was worthwhile. Gabe's the main star of the next chapter, but Marc is still around to tease Sam. @Elmara
Anonymous
11/14/21, 8:10 PM
This was such a fun and wild new installment. Lowkey disappointed that we didn't get to see Gabe bottom. Overall, Gabe's lucked out a lot more than Sam when it comes to unintended side-effects or misfires of the edits. I kinda want him to get some sort of comeuppance the way Sam has lol. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for all the characters!

11/15/21, 4:17 AM
Thanks! Both guys have had unexpected ripples from edits, we just see more from Sam. And Sam's pretty pleased with most of the side-effects so far, or he'd find ways to change them. @
11/14/21, 5:21 PM
Another excellent chapter! The deftness of the writing in the last scene really impresses me. Sam and Gabe chilling for once in bathrobes and Sam acknowledging Marc as his friend was really sweet. And well-paced after all of the hot sex earlier in the chapter. And I loved that Tyler, mentioned in passing in one of the first few chapters, came back into the story. He was such a lazy, hot d-bag. And I loved that Marc had to help Sam and Gabe out in order to resist the spell of Tyler’s dick.

11/15/21, 4:16 AM
Thanks! Credit where credit is due -- Nutiper wrote a lot of the last scene. @MonsterMash62
Anonymous
11/14/21, 2:30 PM
woohoo! so hyped to get to continue this! youve made something great here man!

11/15/21, 4:09 AM
Thanks! Couldn't have done it without help from editors and beta readers! @
11/14/21, 10:50 AM
Definitely worth the wait!

11/15/21, 4:08 AM
Oh, thanks! We definitely put a lot of work into it! Hopefully the next chapter will come sooner. @italianstalian1987