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Anonymous
11/12/21, 3:52 PM
such a good story!!!
11/12/21, 6:25 AM
I really appreciate the work being done to make sure Sammy ends up wanting it more and more of his own volition. Makes it even hotter for me. And I always love lots of cum, so thanks for packing it in!

11/12/21, 9:31 AM
@Soren Fitz kind of words man
11/12/21, 6:03 AM
I don’t know if this is getting ratings yet, but it deserves them! This is very hot and the characters are well-written.

11/12/21, 9:30 AM
@Soren Fitz Thanks man
11/12/21, 8:54 AM
I liked the pacing of this story! Every time jump got me excited to see the next change.
11/12/21, 8:42 AM
Bears, musk, and milk. My favourite kind of story. Right at the beginning you used "Self esteem" but I think you mean "self conscious"
Anonymous
11/12/21, 8:32 AM
Love the story! Matthew turning into Dr. Brown's all American son and forgetting about his past in England is all I had hoped for when his reprogramming started. Even down to the official adoption papers signed! Really looking forward to where you're going with this. Though I disagree with other commentators. A lower IQ would be kind of a mood killer for me. But that's personal preference I guess. So do what you like! Also really interested in the punishment Lucas has planned for his little brother!
11/12/21, 8:19 AM
great story!
11/12/21, 6:31 AM
Okay, this is *such* a cool vibe! “It’s about power.” This is a great, interesting, and hot look at the development of power dynamics… even if it doesn’t necessarily feel realistic. It’s still hot, and very thoughtful. “Everything in the world is about sex, except sex. Sex is about power.”
11/11/21, 8:25 PM
Uhhh....can you make this an entire series of stories? I've love to read it from the beginning of the competition to the end :-D

11/12/21, 6:20 AM
Hey @thequirkyone - thanks! That's such a nice thing to wish for. I'm probably not going to expand this into a series, but only because I have a long list of other ideas I want to visit. I'll be sure to throw this on the 'series potential' list. I'll mention that I did just write a short passage into my next Patreon story where a character is actually watching an episode of 'Straight to the Top'. I'm still writing and rewriting the story, so no guarantee that this scene will make it in, but I thought you might enjoy seeing it: > Whatever the genie dude was going on about, it was time to eat some pizza and watch my show. I scrolled down the TV list past all those boring legal dramas – I get enough of that shit in the office – and found the reality TV section. There’s this show I’m fuckin’ addicted to called “Straight to the Top” where a bunch of gay dudes and one straight guy compete for some ladies attention. It’s total trash, but bro, I can’t stop watching.” > > “Bro, have you seen this before?” I asked, grinning at the genie. “There are like... the hottest fuckin’ dudes on this show. You gotta go back and start from the start. Last week they voted out Parker – man, he was cut like a greek god.” > > “No, I haven’t,” the genie said, giving me a small grin. > > “Oh, you gotta check it out. This is Riley,” I said, pointing to a beefy hunk on screen. “I’m like... totally sure he fucked Parker in the showers last episode. The only reason he’s still on is he won the immunity challenge.” > > “Uh... you’ve seen this before?” Gabe asked. > > “Not funny babe,” I said, rolling my eyes at him. “This is our fuckin’ show.” > > I ate pizza and stared at the TV. They’d made a new rule where all the guys had to go shirtless and I was loving it. Like... Connor’s pecs aren’t huge or anything, but damn if he’s not the bro next door. > > I kept glancing over at Gabe. He wasn’t into it like usual, but whatever. He was having some kind of weird ass night. >
11/12/21, 5:36 AM
pleeeze don,'t finish this story yet! it is tHot ans d sooo sexxxy