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nycboot
11/11/21, 6:26 PM
So glad you reminded us in the Forum of this delightful story. Here's hoping you do similar things in the future!
11/11/21, 2:03 PM
Keep this going, love this story arc!

11/11/21, 6:14 PM
@Kerwin I promise I'm coming back to it! I have a brief interlude with Ethan (Chuck's cousin) first, but then we're back to this little budding family!
11/11/21, 5:09 PM
This is a good story.
11/11/21, 2:38 PM
It felt a little quick as I would have enjoyed seeing everyone get hypnotized. I see how this would have worked really well as a caption story. Mostly, it makes me want to go to a Laotian wedding.

11/11/21, 4:00 PM
@groupple Sorry. Yeah. originally, it was just the scene at the beginning, where an unnamed narrator would have made himself the perfect husband, but I though "I should really write the wedding, actually." Had it been planned as a longer story when I came up with it, several hypnotism scenes would have been there, but I wrote this in 24 hours. Yeah, Laotian weddings sound really cool from what I've read, and the outfits are beautiful.

11/11/21, 4:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish No need to apologize at all. I enjoyed this story a bunch and am excited to see what else you write.

11/11/21, 4:07 PM
@groupple Well, now I'm trying to do something about vampires, don't know when it will be finished. Don't hesitate to read my old stuff. Maybe you'll find something else you'll like. Is there something that you really like? always interested in what my readers want.
11/11/21, 2:44 PM
hot story. will there be another part.

11/11/21, 4:02 PM
@Jonanator You really like my stories, thanks! Well, i planned this as a one-off, but maybe one day I will have the motivation to write the wed life of Leokham and Houava. For now tho, I really want to finish plenty of works I started but never finished, so a sequel in the near future seems unlikely.
11/10/21, 9:16 PM
interesting, maybe a little to fast for me, but like the concept ^ ^ glad to read you again here :3

11/11/21, 3:56 PM
@Math_Reez 💙 Thanks! The goal of a caption is to be short, so yeah... Have I had planned as a story from the get-go, I would have showed more scenes before the wedding. Happy to see my biggest reader anywhere!
Kip
11/10/21, 10:14 PM
That is one awesome thick fucking johnson! ? Put that man meat in my mouth and let me choke on it... ? Uh... let me get that monster cock wet for you before you slide it in my ass! ... I need a dick??? Fuck me.

screamingmoist
11/11/21, 3:08 PM
@Kip uh-oh, looks like someone made the wrong (or right!) person mad.
11/11/21, 2:17 PM
That's a hot chapter.
Scotty
11/11/21, 2:13 PM
I like this theme of black and Hispanic men dominating a white alpha male. Also love that his drug use is daily and now completely part of who he is. Looking forward to the next chapter and the continued destruction of his mind!