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11/12/21, 12:27 AM
Good stuff, if this is your first upload and you're already at this level. I hope to see you carry on and grow :)
11/11/21, 11:21 PM
Such a great chapter! As he falls deeper, it's great to experience the mental changes through him, the addition of the coach, and the himbo acting like an innocent child. The pinky promise was a brilliant detail. Can't wait to for the next chapter.

11/11/21, 11:35 PM
@Essex Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me. 😄
11/11/21, 11:33 PM
really good
11/11/21, 11:15 PM
Loved it man. IT changing guys, so hot. & I love your descriptions
11/11/21, 4:33 PM
Loved it, you do such a good job of writing the "haze" from the 1st person perspective. The whole exchange with Kathleen was weird and hard to understand what was happening, but that's because the reader is experiencing the confusion of the narrator.

11/11/21, 11:14 PM
@amul Thanks for the review! It's hard for me to put myself in the reader's position because I know the story 😂
11/11/21, 8:31 PM
Big into the Dr. Jeckyl and Mr. Hide concept as well and stoked on that being touched on especially as the transformation parts of these stories are my favorite. Stoked on next chapter!
11/11/21, 8:06 PM
Hope to see more!!! love his new changes into becoming the perfect fuck toy!
11/11/21, 7:52 PM
that was so good ! But you left the best part out wanted to see the dad's decent to a life of cuckold. But still very hot story Thanks for writing :))
11/11/21, 7:44 PM
Awesome, as always ;)
nycboot
11/11/21, 6:26 PM
So glad you reminded us in the Forum of this delightful story. Here's hoping you do similar things in the future!