Recent Comments

11/12/21, 4:20 AM
When you tagged this with humour, you really weren't lying lmao. I don't think I've laughed as much from a GSS story before, so many great jokes here!
11/8/21, 7:11 AM
You know it's a good story when you check for the next chapter multiple times a day :) (not trying to sound impatient, just a compliment)

11/8/21, 9:21 AM
@italianstalian1987 same

11/8/21, 11:20 PM
Thanks! It's written, just needs another round of editing. @italianstalian1987

11/9/21, 4:04 AM
@bluesuedewho Nutiper and MonsterMash told me to tell you that no edits need to be made :)

11/12/21, 4:14 AM
@bluesuedewho if anything, Sam and Gabe have only shown us how important it is to edit before you publish something :) and so sorry to hear real life has been rough, but hope things are getting better!
11/12/21, 12:27 AM
Good stuff, if this is your first upload and you're already at this level. I hope to see you carry on and grow :)
11/11/21, 11:21 PM
Such a great chapter! As he falls deeper, it's great to experience the mental changes through him, the addition of the coach, and the himbo acting like an innocent child. The pinky promise was a brilliant detail. Can't wait to for the next chapter.

11/11/21, 11:35 PM
@Essex Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me. 😄
11/11/21, 11:33 PM
really good
11/11/21, 11:15 PM
Loved it man. IT changing guys, so hot. & I love your descriptions
11/11/21, 4:33 PM
Loved it, you do such a good job of writing the "haze" from the 1st person perspective. The whole exchange with Kathleen was weird and hard to understand what was happening, but that's because the reader is experiencing the confusion of the narrator.

11/11/21, 11:14 PM
@amul Thanks for the review! It's hard for me to put myself in the reader's position because I know the story 😂
11/11/21, 8:31 PM
Big into the Dr. Jeckyl and Mr. Hide concept as well and stoked on that being touched on especially as the transformation parts of these stories are my favorite. Stoked on next chapter!
11/11/21, 8:06 PM
Hope to see more!!! love his new changes into becoming the perfect fuck toy!
11/11/21, 7:52 PM
that was so good ! But you left the best part out wanted to see the dad's decent to a life of cuckold. But still very hot story Thanks for writing :))