Recent Comments

11/11/21, 11:15 PM
Loved it man. IT changing guys, so hot. & I love your descriptions
11/11/21, 4:33 PM
Loved it, you do such a good job of writing the "haze" from the 1st person perspective. The whole exchange with Kathleen was weird and hard to understand what was happening, but that's because the reader is experiencing the confusion of the narrator.

11/11/21, 11:14 PM
@amul Thanks for the review! It's hard for me to put myself in the reader's position because I know the story 😂
11/11/21, 8:31 PM
Big into the Dr. Jeckyl and Mr. Hide concept as well and stoked on that being touched on especially as the transformation parts of these stories are my favorite. Stoked on next chapter!
11/11/21, 8:06 PM
Hope to see more!!! love his new changes into becoming the perfect fuck toy!
11/11/21, 7:52 PM
that was so good ! But you left the best part out wanted to see the dad's decent to a life of cuckold. But still very hot story Thanks for writing :))
11/11/21, 7:44 PM
Awesome, as always ;)
nycboot
11/11/21, 6:26 PM
So glad you reminded us in the Forum of this delightful story. Here's hoping you do similar things in the future!
11/11/21, 2:03 PM
Keep this going, love this story arc!

11/11/21, 6:14 PM
@Kerwin I promise I'm coming back to it! I have a brief interlude with Ethan (Chuck's cousin) first, but then we're back to this little budding family!
11/11/21, 5:09 PM
This is a good story.
11/11/21, 2:38 PM
It felt a little quick as I would have enjoyed seeing everyone get hypnotized. I see how this would have worked really well as a caption story. Mostly, it makes me want to go to a Laotian wedding.

11/11/21, 4:00 PM
@groupple Sorry. Yeah. originally, it was just the scene at the beginning, where an unnamed narrator would have made himself the perfect husband, but I though "I should really write the wedding, actually." Had it been planned as a longer story when I came up with it, several hypnotism scenes would have been there, but I wrote this in 24 hours. Yeah, Laotian weddings sound really cool from what I've read, and the outfits are beautiful.

11/11/21, 4:02 PM
@BobbyBlobfish No need to apologize at all. I enjoyed this story a bunch and am excited to see what else you write.

11/11/21, 4:07 PM
@groupple Well, now I'm trying to do something about vampires, don't know when it will be finished. Don't hesitate to read my old stuff. Maybe you'll find something else you'll like. Is there something that you really like? always interested in what my readers want.