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boi98229
11/11/21, 3:48 AM
Perfect, except that it was so hot, i just wanted it to go on and on. Still, it's a new favorite for me.
11/10/21, 4:48 PM
Would love the son's to learn the proper respect for a police officer.& for the father to discipline his son's accordingly ! He might also decide to train his son's with a little help from master vincent of course !

11/11/21, 2:36 AM
@little tiny tim It's a good idea, but I don't think that'll fit the characters for this story. Vicente has been portrayed as disdainful of authority, so that wouldn't make sense for him to do, while Sean is on his way to becoming a cop, so is probably about as respectful of cops as he can be. If Vicente had been a cop instead of Matthew, that would've worked perfectly.
Sep 13, 2013
11/11/21, 1:26 AM
I loved every single moment reading that story
Martin
11/10/21, 11:06 PM
This has been a very lovely experience. Cute and really well written. A bit long for my usual taste, but I'm really looking forward to the second chapter!

11/10/21, 11:39 PM
I really appreciate that! Thanks for trying it even despite the length, haha. I’m not sure I could have divided it any further without having no-sex chapters, but hopefully people will still read it! (And thanks for advertising mine and Diego Blue’s Cupid exclusives on Spiral!) I hope you enjoy chapter 2. Chapter 3 should come out in a week or two! @Martin
11/10/21, 10:28 PM
As always, what a top class story! such a great premis. I didn't see the plot twist until Parker realised and was shocked he was voted out of the show, then delighted that thr audience voted him OUT of the closet that he didn't know he was in. Great fun with the straight to gay theme. What a ride. You're stories are always so imaginitive.

11/10/21, 11:05 PM
Thanks @Lusty Stallion! I've had this one bouncing around my head for a while, and it finally felt like it was ready to be written. Glad you enjoyed it!
11/10/21, 10:12 PM
Wow, that's another steamy chapter! I didn't expect the outcome action for this family, but l sure enjoyed the vivid description of the depraved yet oblivious tongue-ass intercourse! Please carry on with Tanner's tour around town in corrupting every family in ever more depraved ways...all in the name of improving them! ;) One thought though, seems like the families visited so far are all like broken/trashy. Are you planning on also "improving" the lives of some more clean-cut, well-behaved families...or perhaps some upper class snobbish ones that need some proper "teaching" in manners? Of course, it is up to you to plan out your story as you wish, I look forward to reading whatever you have on mind for the rest of the congregation! ;)
11/10/21, 6:19 PM
your pacing is so tortuously good!!!

11/10/21, 9:47 PM
@Razz TFs I do know how to keep people hooked!
11/10/21, 2:40 PM
You tease! But that was very good timing and you kept the sexual tempo up just right until the crash. I’m looking forward to seeing if Chris can get over this.

11/10/21, 9:46 PM
@Soren Fitz We love a good tease!
11/10/21, 2:37 PM
This was very fun and very hot, and I’m trying to learn from your work here on how to pace my sex scenes effectively, too! Very well done.

11/10/21, 9:40 PM
@Soren Fitz Great to hear the repsonse is good to the sex scenes. They're by no means perfect, but feel free to take some inspiration from them!
11/10/21, 9:19 PM
I often had trouble getting my posts to Tumblr to be formatted right. It sucks when it doesn't work.