Recent Comments

11/10/21, 5:15 PM
I'm really into Eduardo's storyline!

11/10/21, 6:54 PM
@Transformheaven Good! Because you'll get a lot of Eduardo in the final chapter.
Anonymous
11/10/21, 6:20 PM
I'm not usually one into rimming but this was amazing!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
11/10/21, 6:00 PM
I'd love to see if the twink starts to change...
11/10/21, 5:49 AM
this whole story is so hot I love the set up and everything. cant wait for more parts

11/10/21, 5:16 PM
@Benv Thanks!
11/9/21, 11:40 PM
Sorry, your a terrific writer & I love the general theme of your story, but since I'm not that into rimming, this was not what I expected. Wish it would have dealt more with the dad's drinking & more general depravity, etc...but your the author so it's not my call. Would have loved for the son to become more like his dad!!!

11/10/21, 3:34 AM
@little tiny tim Thanks for always being so willing to let me know how the reading is going. I hope our tastes align again in the future!

11/10/21, 4:40 PM
@S. Q. Neemie Thank you for being kind enough to read your readers comments...I just felt that since you had made a point of mentioning the dad's heavy drinking & his son's aversion to it in several chapters, Tanner would have taken advantage of this by turning the kid into a heavy drinker himself! I would have loved Tanner to be there to instill new low-moral values in both father & son ! This would have opened the door to some heavy, dirty & debotched drunken sex! Also, the mention of the filthy house offered all sorts of possibilites in the boy starting to accept more of a piggish lifestyle [perhaps even 'gainer-porn???] Other than it being a rimming , B&D & S&M story, I didn't feel the overall perversion I was so looking forward to. Also the father & the pastor might be brought together by Tanner to develop some ideas for their sons 'moral-development'. Of, w course , whatever you come-up with, I'll continue to be a faithfull reader & again 'thank you'...
11/10/21, 2:54 PM
This metaphor says it all, "now that Amazon was spreading its tendrils everywhere, the malls had just turned into dried-out husks, empty shells of their former selves". Love this story and all your Sci-Fi themed writings. My suggestions: The Thing, War of the Worlds (not to be confused with H.G. Wells' The War of the Worlds), Skyline, District 9, Logan's Run, Scanners, They Live.
Anonymous
11/10/21, 1:58 PM
beautiful story man. sooooooo good!!! i really hope there is a sequel
Anonymous
11/10/21, 1:28 PM
You can't stop this now bro
11/10/21, 1:00 PM
I agree with the previous comments: this is a well-written story, very funny and sexy and unexpected. Lance and Nigel arguing about Randall's transformation as "Frankenstein" is hilarious, particularly as Clay frustratedly insists, "FRANKENSTEIN was the DOCTOR!" This is a really clever nod to a cultural joke/misunderstanding that has been running now for over two centuries. The manner in which the characters come to inhabit their Mariposa-induced 'costumes' is great. Psychology and action go hand-in-hand and I am sure that the guys will have a wild Halloween night with unexpected surprises. Thanks for the new Mariposa story and please keep the chapters coming!
Simon
11/10/21, 11:41 AM
Brilliant writing and terrific plot! Wouldn't it be great if this could happen for real? I'd love to meet Chaz and Nick and succumb to their brainwashing. More please!