Recent Comments

11/10/21, 8:37 PM
Gosh, Mr. L certainly takes a situation in hand quickly. Can't wait to see all the hot things Ben has to do to build up enough power to open that portal...
11/10/21, 8:24 PM
I didn't really find this story arousing in any way, but I did find it fascinating to read about Laotian wedding traditions, so thanks for that!

11/10/21, 8:30 PM
@Hypnothrill Yeah, I find hypnosis more arousing than sex, so none of my stories are very sexual (some are just straight-up no sexual tension) =(. And that one was kind of a whim... Glad you enjoyed the read still! I'm not sure I got the traditions all right... Did I ever precise the country or did you find out by looking more into what i was describing? Honestly, I'm trying hard to push for less usual culture and characters in my writing recently, so I'm glad some are interested! I'll try being more sexy next time! =)
11/10/21, 8:23 PM
went to edit the first chapter that was a duplicate of the second chapter, only to find that its back to being the first chapter... Now my head hurts. I think the site glitched or something.
11/10/21, 5:15 PM
I'm really into Eduardo's storyline!

11/10/21, 6:54 PM
@Transformheaven Good! Because you'll get a lot of Eduardo in the final chapter.
Anonymous
11/10/21, 6:20 PM
I'm not usually one into rimming but this was amazing!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
11/10/21, 6:00 PM
I'd love to see if the twink starts to change...
11/10/21, 5:49 AM
this whole story is so hot I love the set up and everything. cant wait for more parts

11/10/21, 5:16 PM
@Benv Thanks!
11/9/21, 11:40 PM
Sorry, your a terrific writer & I love the general theme of your story, but since I'm not that into rimming, this was not what I expected. Wish it would have dealt more with the dad's drinking & more general depravity, etc...but your the author so it's not my call. Would have loved for the son to become more like his dad!!!

11/10/21, 3:34 AM
@little tiny tim Thanks for always being so willing to let me know how the reading is going. I hope our tastes align again in the future!

11/10/21, 4:40 PM
@S. Q. Neemie Thank you for being kind enough to read your readers comments...I just felt that since you had made a point of mentioning the dad's heavy drinking & his son's aversion to it in several chapters, Tanner would have taken advantage of this by turning the kid into a heavy drinker himself! I would have loved Tanner to be there to instill new low-moral values in both father & son ! This would have opened the door to some heavy, dirty & debotched drunken sex! Also, the mention of the filthy house offered all sorts of possibilites in the boy starting to accept more of a piggish lifestyle [perhaps even 'gainer-porn???] Other than it being a rimming , B&D & S&M story, I didn't feel the overall perversion I was so looking forward to. Also the father & the pastor might be brought together by Tanner to develop some ideas for their sons 'moral-development'. Of, w course , whatever you come-up with, I'll continue to be a faithfull reader & again 'thank you'...
11/10/21, 2:54 PM
This metaphor says it all, "now that Amazon was spreading its tendrils everywhere, the malls had just turned into dried-out husks, empty shells of their former selves". Love this story and all your Sci-Fi themed writings. My suggestions: The Thing, War of the Worlds (not to be confused with H.G. Wells' The War of the Worlds), Skyline, District 9, Logan's Run, Scanners, They Live.
Anonymous
11/10/21, 1:58 PM
beautiful story man. sooooooo good!!! i really hope there is a sequel