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Anonymous
11/10/21, 1:28 PM
You can't stop this now bro
11/10/21, 1:00 PM
I agree with the previous comments: this is a well-written story, very funny and sexy and unexpected. Lance and Nigel arguing about Randall's transformation as "Frankenstein" is hilarious, particularly as Clay frustratedly insists, "FRANKENSTEIN was the DOCTOR!" This is a really clever nod to a cultural joke/misunderstanding that has been running now for over two centuries. The manner in which the characters come to inhabit their Mariposa-induced 'costumes' is great. Psychology and action go hand-in-hand and I am sure that the guys will have a wild Halloween night with unexpected surprises. Thanks for the new Mariposa story and please keep the chapters coming!
Simon
11/10/21, 11:41 AM
Brilliant writing and terrific plot! Wouldn't it be great if this could happen for real? I'd love to meet Chaz and Nick and succumb to their brainwashing. More please!
Cutiepie183
11/10/21, 10:58 AM
another great chapter to a super hot story!! Wow can't wait to see what happens next...
Anonymous
11/10/21, 10:30 AM
This was amazing!
11/10/21, 10:02 AM
One of my favourite stories that I keep 'coming' back to. I love the fact the reader figures out the character is trapped in a spider's web before the character does (or doesn't in the case of Travis). I also like the fact that any female characters are written out before they even appear. Please keep writing!
11/10/21, 6:50 AM
Great chapter! I admit this is not my favorite story of yours (I think the complete lack of resistance and not much time being spent in the main characters' heads are reasons why), but a Hypnothrill tale is ALWAYS hot stuff. Write what YOU want, and the rest will follow! :)

11/10/21, 9:59 AM
@Feed Your Head Interesting point about the lack of resistance. I think that's not entirely true, because Eduardo is certainly putting up a LOT of resistance, but Juan and Andrew (the two gay boys) were certainly easy to turn, and even Daniel didn't put up that much resistance; he was just slower to change because he was initially straight. I'm still using a lot of free indirect discourse to get into the characters' heads (as I usually do when writing 3rd person stories), but I think the difference here might be that I'm not just limiting the perspective to a single focalizing character (as I normally would). Again, this is partly because of the photos I was working with, but I wanted to include some scenes in which Daniel wasn't present, and for that I needed to dip into Juan, Andrew, and Eduardo's heads as well. In the last part, I spend a bit more time in the Manager's head, which is unusual for me, in that I normally don't flesh out my mind controllers this much or give them specific motivations.
11/10/21, 9:58 AM
I want a winter holiday and spring break, halloween. 😂😂
11/10/21, 9:44 AM
I love how *wholesome* this chapter is in the middle. The Dad being made to turn his life around. And then the massage table, the bottom half dropping away, mirroring the flow of the story... I don't want this story to end for a long time.
Jul 28, 2020
11/10/21, 6:26 AM
Amazing! Your sex scenes are so well written. "There’s no resistance, you crave me penetrating you ... but your moans are proof that you’re a total hole-slut." Splooge man! Seriously, glad I stumbled on this story, merci man.

Martin
11/10/21, 9:14 AM
Thank you so much @Kypup! It was a pleasure to write, I had put myself into some kind of sexual haze back then and wrote most of this in a matter of an hour or two.