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11/9/21, 9:29 PM
crazy idea, but itd be cool if Sam topped Gabe. i just like thinking of big top guys bottoming haha
11/9/21, 9:25 PM
Love it! Makes me sorry it's no longer summer. I want to hop a ferry to Fire Island right now!
11/9/21, 8:08 PM
Very glad to see a new chapter of this! I love how you depict the mental transformations of the bulls (although I wasn't quite clear on why Scott seemed to be reverting back to normal towards the end). The one part that could have used some more work in my opinion is the Warden's monologue. It just felt like the sexy parts of the story were being put on pause to deliver this huge, unmotivated info dump; it might have felt more natural if Joe used his skills as a journalist to ask the Warden some probing questions.

11/9/21, 8:27 PM
@Hypnothrill Glad to hear you like it! I was struggling a bit with this background, which resulted in a bit of an info dump. I envisioned the Warden to be this somewhat lengthy talker, which resulted in the monologue as well, I dialed it down in the last chapter. Just in general, one of my biggest struggles that I have when writing is that I rely a lot on speech of my characters I feel, so that's room for improvement :)
11/9/21, 7:45 PM
I hope he goes back to Nick. They are a great match.
Anonymous
11/9/21, 7:07 PM
excellent work thanks!!!
11/9/21, 6:14 PM
I'm curious does this story not show up at all in your feeds when going back through to find it? I went back more then a month and it didn't show up once I had to actually search for it and I don't have anything turned off so not sure why I can't see it.
Anonymous
11/9/21, 6:00 PM
this was a hit read hopefully be a part two.... maybe the losing team should have a more humiliating punishment in the next game for not wearing"regulation" underwear
11/9/21, 4:04 PM
The story was alright. Could go without the breaking bones. Altogether I ended up feeling bad for him, rather than getting off
11/9/21, 3:44 PM
ohhhh yes. i love a good reality-rewriting device in the right hands. well done!
11/8/21, 11:02 PM
Sleeper agent for the company, a rubber drone but one that looks human for now. that the company can switch on and off at will

11/9/21, 3:03 PM
@MalSkin That's a very nice theory ; ) but that's quite not what will happen