Gracias por la historia cachonda, Piko. Me llama la atención porque el hermano menor sigue teniendo dudas sobre su poder. Eso lo hace humano y emocionante. Además, me encanta el hecho de que sea el hermano menor quien domine. De este modo, rompe la situación natural en la que el hermano mayor mantiene a su hermano pequeño bajo su pulgar. Es un placer leerlo.

This has been amazing! I just binge-read to catch up and I'm thoroughly enjoying myself.

Masterfully done. So very hot.

Next chapter really soon, I swear. It's sitting at 15k words, I just need to trim and polish a bit more. Real life has been a bit of a disaster lately.

Questions for clarification: With the current edits, what defines straight for people in this world? And even potentially gay? Because if straight people like gay porn and straight guys like blowjobs, aren't they then bisexual? And if everyone wants to "have fun" with Tyler and Marc, then wouldn't that make lesbian women bisexual if they meet Tyler and straight men bi or gay if they have sex with Marc? And do straight women have their own equivalent of sexual things they do with other women but don't see as lesbian? Finally, do gay people in this world have any edits that make them sometimes do sexual things with the opposite sex, like straight people in this story do with the same sex? ...Come to think of it, I could see Sam making some kind of everyone is bisexual edit due to the pressures of previous edits and his intense desire to be straight colliding. *** "It's completely, totally straight for all straight people to be totally attracted to both sexes" Sam wrote in the book. "What the hell are you doing? Can't you just accept you like guys? Making all straight people like both sexes...then they're not straight anymore!" Gabe said. "Screw you. Literally and otherwise." "Well, I guess you're a lot more hunky and I'm into guys and we're friends... so...but I can't believe you would--" "I can't believe you're so judgmental. I wish you knew what I felt li--oh." Sam used his mental connection to the book to write something on a page that Gabe wouldn't see. "Everyone in the world, straight, gay, bisexual, or any orientation; from this moment on, will be totally attracted to both sexes and very horny." "What did you do?!?" Gabe screamed. "I don't know." "I'm fantasizing about girls now...and guys. So confusing." "So's everyone else pal. How do you feel now that you know what it's like for your sexuality to be screwed with? You're as gay as I am straight." "Seriously. Fuck you." "In the bed?" "Hell yeah." *** I'm not sure if that fanfic of mine is due to me being horny or actually understanding the characters. Or both. I await your critique, BlueSuedeWho!

Finally got on this train and I'm obsessed with this story after reading Edits. You're SUCH a good writer, man!!!! Can't wait to read more

please part 2

Very well done. I think i prefer the low-stakes framing of this kind of extreme transformation compared to stories where things like this happen to a character and alter them permanently.

Great start! Hope that there will be more!

I'm so loving this story, it's my favorite.