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11/8/21, 9:14 PM
This looks like it is gonna be so hot.
11/8/21, 9:05 PM
Nice start, sexy potential. I like the way he called the cop "good boy" and I hope said guy comes to find pleasure in that. While I am not so much for humiliation them keeping it to the house was nice. I hope that our main guy doesn't ruin him publically, especially as I think there is a lot more potential in having a cop under his control then having a former cop. My final thought, and sort of obligatory request, is please have some buttplay and rimming. :) But yeah, nice start. Oh, as a note, the whole "he just drank" perfectly set up the whole hypnosis being a bit easier than it otherwise would be. So kudos on that.
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11/8/21, 5:55 PM
Dude, you're an amazing writer- as always, a creative premise and execution that keeps you guessing on what exactly is going on, all the while keeping it sexy- I don't know how you juggle that many things and make it all work, but I'm impressed! I'm curious, though- if they're all straight and all gradually change, how does the show's ending work? If a guy is halfway changed by the end, does he go back to how he was before? Or stay straight but with a newfound love of pegging?

11/8/21, 8:45 PM
Thanks! I was honestly worried I had too much going on in this story because there are two impossible things in the premise – a reality show centered around voting out gay people, and a reality show that turns it's contestants gay. I'm a big fan of the idea that you should be able to describe the premise in a sentence or two, and this one required putting a heavyhanded monologue up front. But c'est la vie, it seems like everyone got it! Now, obviously I haven't watched the last episode of the show, but my guess is that either one of the guys will be unaffected by the house (while his housemates slowly get more and more openly gay, probably faster than the viewers can vote them out!), or we'll end up with a winner who identifies as a straight guy who just likes to fuck around with dudes... frequently.
11/8/21, 8:06 PM
NICE!
11/8/21, 7:50 PM
Great story, but I think part of a paragraph got left out right as the kid starts the induction.

11/8/21, 8:03 PM
@Evelded surprisingly (and i say that because when i first tried to post the chapter the whole first five parts were missing until after i clicked around XD) the induction came out as i hoped. I figured that sense Drake had already consumed some alcohol, it made the induction easier since his mind was already starting to get foggy. Thanks for the comment, love, and support!! -Grim 💀🖤
11/8/21, 2:16 PM
The tempo remains great here! Feels like it’s building toward something—looking forward to culmination. (Culmination autocorrected to cum inflation on my phone. If you know it you know it =P )

11/8/21, 7:35 PM
@Soren Fitz Haha your phone is getting too intuitive!
11/8/21, 2:07 PM
The subtle homoeroticism during the cupcake scene is great and keeps the sexual tempo up. I enjoyed it!

11/8/21, 7:34 PM
@Soren Fitz Love a bit of homoeroticism!
11/8/21, 2:05 PM
The slow burn switch here is good—you used that sex scene in the first chapter to get readers hooked, and the idea here is great.

11/8/21, 7:32 PM
@Soren Fitz Wow. You have a good eye for detail. Well done on picking up on that change of pace. It was a deliberate move to slow down the story and move from sex to romance, reflecting on the character's changing motivations. I appreciate you mentioning it!
11/8/21, 2:02 PM
Your writing style is easy to read and yet flows really well and has great descriptions! Your concision + elegance is admirable. Keep up the good work. (Also, the sex scene was hot.)

11/8/21, 7:29 PM
@Soren Fitz Aww thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback about my writing style! It's great to hear you are enjoying it.