Recent Comments

11/8/21, 2:02 PM
Your writing style is easy to read and yet flows really well and has great descriptions! Your concision + elegance is admirable. Keep up the good work. (Also, the sex scene was hot.)

11/8/21, 7:29 PM
@Soren Fitz Aww thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback about my writing style! It's great to hear you are enjoying it.
11/8/21, 7:24 PM
Nothing beats a good ass kissing scene. hopefully it was a tasty and humbling experience. keep up the great work
Dee
11/8/21, 7:16 PM
Nice story waiting for more
11/8/21, 6:18 PM
WOW! Very impressive story! I like the transformation! Although at times it was a bit too cruel, I enjoyed a lot with all the humiliation elements (especially the failed interview and Aaron clothes and debasement during the whole thing), and the dumbing down. I'll take a look at your previous stories, since this was very enjoyable!
11/7/21, 3:18 PM
Great story! [Spoilers!] The slow transition from totally straight to somewhat gay to mostly gay was great to read. It didn't completely affect him until he was voted Out which was cool. I'm hoping Riley gets voted OUT and hooks up with Parker. I wish there was a second part to this. Would love to have it turn out that all or nearly all the guys were straight in the beginning and the house somehow changed them. This was a very hot story idea.

11/7/21, 10:18 PM
Thanks @Cutlerfan! I’m pretty sure Riley would make it a few more weeks before getting voted OUT himself. The guys were absolutely all straight in the beginning — I chose to leave the mechanism for change ambiguous deliberately, because I wanted you to realize what was happening at the same pace as Parker. I felt like showing some ray of light zapping him or a producer with a control panel of ‘Kinsey sliders’ or whatever would have been too much of a giveaway too soon.

11/8/21, 2:48 PM
@Derek Williams [Spoilers] Yes, the mystery of what was causing them to slide down the scale was cool because I didn't know when and how it would trigger changes. Great work!
11/8/21, 2:18 PM
That was fun as hell! I’m looking forward to more. (Clearly I’ve been binging. Sorry for the influx of comments! And if you ever find it in your heart to include mild cum inflation… I ask everyone that. Don’t mind me.)
11/8/21, 2:17 PM
This story is great! Please continue soon!!!!!
11/8/21, 1:38 PM
This is a great start! I love his lack of awareness to start! Don't spend too much time on the explanation, at least all at once!

Martin
11/8/21, 2:08 PM
@Drajon Thank you! I can't wait to start to write the second chapter...
11/7/21, 3:25 PM
Intrigued Hope develops and see how plays out like both sort of lose control So aliens or angels? Eh doesn't

Martin
11/7/21, 4:10 PM
@Darmani I want to concentrate on our hero's adventures as an incubus - but I think there should be some room for the backstory as well. Let's see :)

11/7/21, 10:44 PM
@Martin No, please. forward no need for backstory focus. That can draw attention. I appreciate setup. No need for more, its perfunctory, macguffin people. I'm fine.

Martin
11/8/21, 2:08 PM
@Darmani Don't worry, I'll find the right balance... I'm full of ideas already. They keep me from being able to concentrate on my actual day job!