Recent Comments

11/8/21, 2:16 PM
The tempo remains great here! Feels like it’s building toward something—looking forward to culmination. (Culmination autocorrected to cum inflation on my phone. If you know it you know it =P )

11/8/21, 7:35 PM
@Soren Fitz Haha your phone is getting too intuitive!
11/8/21, 2:07 PM
The subtle homoeroticism during the cupcake scene is great and keeps the sexual tempo up. I enjoyed it!

11/8/21, 7:34 PM
@Soren Fitz Love a bit of homoeroticism!
11/8/21, 2:05 PM
The slow burn switch here is good—you used that sex scene in the first chapter to get readers hooked, and the idea here is great.

11/8/21, 7:32 PM
@Soren Fitz Wow. You have a good eye for detail. Well done on picking up on that change of pace. It was a deliberate move to slow down the story and move from sex to romance, reflecting on the character's changing motivations. I appreciate you mentioning it!
11/8/21, 2:02 PM
Your writing style is easy to read and yet flows really well and has great descriptions! Your concision + elegance is admirable. Keep up the good work. (Also, the sex scene was hot.)

11/8/21, 7:29 PM
@Soren Fitz Aww thank you so much. I really appreciate the feedback about my writing style! It's great to hear you are enjoying it.
11/8/21, 7:24 PM
Nothing beats a good ass kissing scene. hopefully it was a tasty and humbling experience. keep up the great work
Dee
11/8/21, 7:16 PM
Nice story waiting for more
11/8/21, 6:18 PM
WOW! Very impressive story! I like the transformation! Although at times it was a bit too cruel, I enjoyed a lot with all the humiliation elements (especially the failed interview and Aaron clothes and debasement during the whole thing), and the dumbing down. I'll take a look at your previous stories, since this was very enjoyable!
11/7/21, 3:18 PM
Great story! [Spoilers!] The slow transition from totally straight to somewhat gay to mostly gay was great to read. It didn't completely affect him until he was voted Out which was cool. I'm hoping Riley gets voted OUT and hooks up with Parker. I wish there was a second part to this. Would love to have it turn out that all or nearly all the guys were straight in the beginning and the house somehow changed them. This was a very hot story idea.

11/7/21, 10:18 PM
Thanks @Cutlerfan! I’m pretty sure Riley would make it a few more weeks before getting voted OUT himself. The guys were absolutely all straight in the beginning — I chose to leave the mechanism for change ambiguous deliberately, because I wanted you to realize what was happening at the same pace as Parker. I felt like showing some ray of light zapping him or a producer with a control panel of ‘Kinsey sliders’ or whatever would have been too much of a giveaway too soon.

11/8/21, 2:48 PM
@Derek Williams [Spoilers] Yes, the mystery of what was causing them to slide down the scale was cool because I didn't know when and how it would trigger changes. Great work!
11/8/21, 2:18 PM
That was fun as hell! I’m looking forward to more. (Clearly I’ve been binging. Sorry for the influx of comments! And if you ever find it in your heart to include mild cum inflation… I ask everyone that. Don’t mind me.)