Recent Comments

11/8/21, 2:18 PM
That was fun as hell! I’m looking forward to more. (Clearly I’ve been binging. Sorry for the influx of comments! And if you ever find it in your heart to include mild cum inflation… I ask everyone that. Don’t mind me.)
11/8/21, 2:17 PM
This story is great! Please continue soon!!!!!
11/8/21, 1:38 PM
This is a great start! I love his lack of awareness to start! Don't spend too much time on the explanation, at least all at once!

Martin
11/8/21, 2:08 PM
@Drajon Thank you! I can't wait to start to write the second chapter...
11/7/21, 3:25 PM
Intrigued Hope develops and see how plays out like both sort of lose control So aliens or angels? Eh doesn't

Martin
11/7/21, 4:10 PM
@Darmani I want to concentrate on our hero's adventures as an incubus - but I think there should be some room for the backstory as well. Let's see :)

11/7/21, 10:44 PM
@Martin No, please. forward no need for backstory focus. That can draw attention. I appreciate setup. No need for more, its perfunctory, macguffin people. I'm fine.

Martin
11/8/21, 2:08 PM
@Darmani Don't worry, I'll find the right balance... I'm full of ideas already. They keep me from being able to concentrate on my actual day job!
11/7/21, 10:09 PM
Off to a great start, Martin! Anxious to see where you go! Title Option: Mis-Incubus

Martin
11/8/21, 2:07 PM
@absman420 Now I'm almost as flushed as the waiter in our story :) Mis-Incubus... Hm. I have to think about that. Do you think "Suddenly Incubus" doesn't work?
11/8/21, 1:38 PM
I am just really loving this series! Keep on going!

11/8/21, 1:58 PM
@Drajon thanks man!
Tmp1142
11/8/21, 1:51 PM
Cop to pocket gay? Everything he has now, but in a much smaller form.
Rubberdrone
11/8/21, 12:12 PM
can't wait for more!
11/7/21, 8:41 PM
I'm loving this hot story!

11/7/21, 9:03 PM
@Uncle Arctos Thank you! I'm about to start working on the next part!

11/8/21, 1:53 AM
@BoredSoap I can't wait!!! Woooooof!

11/8/21, 7:04 AM
I hope you'll like it daddy...I-I mean @Uncle Arctos!
11/8/21, 2:37 AM
Very hot! I would love to read the next part (or a prequel), I hope Jeremy get to enslave the coach as well <3 Btw, on a personal level... if I were Victor I would use the device to ensure Jeremy wont use it against me or enslave people to do so, just for precaution~