Recent Comments

11/7/21, 3:39 PM
That was a great turnaround, and you paced it really well. I felt very comfortable with the apparent(?) straight-to-gay, rather than existential angst, so that’s always a plus for me. And it was hot! (All it needs is cum inflation. Ahem, ahem.)

Martin
11/7/21, 4:12 PM
@Soren Fitz Glad you liked it! Let's see how much cum an incubus can produce ;)
11/6/21, 8:03 PM
Wonderful descriptions of growth. Glad karma finally got around to someone.

11/7/21, 1:35 AM
@Cutlerfan Oh karma was just waiting for Whit to just push it too far. Trust me, I haven't changed ANYTHING in this story due to comments, though I do appreciate them SO very much. The story is coming together as I had envisioned from the start. I think you'll like where it's going to end. Karma and the amulet ain't done with anyone yet.

11/7/21, 3:02 PM
@Uncle Arctos Awesome! [Yeah I was a kid in the 80s, lol]

11/7/21, 3:49 PM
@Cutlerfan so was I! Awesome dates me. 🐻😁
11/7/21, 3:24 PM
Wonderful beginning!
11/7/21, 11:41 AM
Didn't comment so far on the earlier chapters but I've loved this story so far. It's scorchingly hot but you're also doing a great job at keeping the characters with distinct motivations and personalities. It's fantastic.

11/7/21, 12:55 PM
@Reynard Thanks man, kind words!
Cracker
11/7/21, 12:18 PM
I have to agree each chapter is a "cyber page turner". The guys getting "done" have their own individuality and their "seduction" , if you call it that lol, in each case is unique.
11/7/21, 10:51 AM
why not make the cop into a sexy power bottom of a cowboy?
11/7/21, 10:50 AM
might I suggest a TF into a surfer twunk/bro?
11/7/21, 7:59 AM
Wow. This is INCREDIBLE! I love the implication that *all* of the guys believe that they're the straight one, but something about Molly naming them as gay shifts their reality and makes them ACTUALLY gay. What a fun, flirty premise. And for the curious: Lifetime actually DID air a reality show akin to this once. It was called "Gay, Straight, or Taken." In every episode, a woman meets three hunks: one gay in a relationship, one straight in a relationship, and one straight and single. She had to figure out who was who by going on dates and asking questions. If she chose the straight single guy, they won a luxury vacation. Quality programming. :p

11/7/21, 8:58 AM
@Feed Your Head There was a reality show that was even closer to this, called Playing It Straight, which was basically The Bachelor, only half of the men were secretly gay. (Yes, it aired on FOX). And yes, I loved Derek's story too!

11/7/21, 9:05 AM
Thanks @Feed Your Head! My intent was that everyone was straight, until the voters decided they weren't, but I totally see how the Molly scene previews that idea. I think I watched one episode of some reality show that had the 'is he gay?' premise before turning it off. Not sure if it's the one you're saying or the one Hypnothrill has mentioned.
11/7/21, 8:32 AM
Today I learned the word mouthcock. I enjoy a nice, bizarre story and I do love a happy ending. I did find Leandro's dialogue a little off-putting. I had to keep stopping to work out what he was saying, but the payoff... "Glone glundred per cent" is a +1 in my book. Very happy I read this.
JG
11/7/21, 7:40 AM
yet another wonderful story by @RobinHood70 it's always a pleasure to read your stories!!! thank you