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11/7/21, 5:18 AM
Hope you do more to this.
Anonymous
11/7/21, 2:35 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!!!
11/5/21, 10:27 AM
Glad to see Jimmy become an active character again! Whit's ongoing transformations have been and are incredible.

11/7/21, 1:32 AM
@amul Jimmy was never out of the picture, but sometimes you have to let other actors have center stage for awhile... so they can get enough rope with which to hang themselves.
Annon
11/5/21, 2:41 AM
yup. loved this. more immobile stories! I'll be adding some myself but damn i wanna see more from you too haha : tight stories

11/7/21, 1:31 AM
@Annon I thought Whit deserved to discover what greed gets you the hard way.
Zac
11/7/21, 12:21 AM
HOT!
11/7/21, 12:06 AM
Superhot but sometimes confusing as POV changed in a single paragraph
This Can't Be Happening
11/6/21, 11:24 PM
Love how the clothes are changing! The idea of people getting more and more sexualized and wearing sluttier and sluttier clothes without noticing has always been a huge turn on for me. Really brings me back to my high school fantasies. Love a slutty bully.
11/6/21, 11:02 PM
I hope to see how Xander's family was affected by the game
11/6/21, 9:53 PM
great story !
11/6/21, 3:21 PM
hoooo boy,that was a long one. Ethan's Transformation is especially interesting,it seems like Vince was after him all along and his brother and dad (and friend) are just collateral. That being said,I'm interested to see what happens now when dad gets back home. Ethan is on his way to get fucked into submission,I assume so I'm excited to see what will happen to the others

11/6/21, 9:38 PM
@ForgottenCradle Ironically, my first draft was short relative to the rest of the series, but I felt it jumped around a lot and didn't explain things well, so I scrapped all but the first couple of pages and rewrote. Then, this happened! lol