Recent Comments

11/6/21, 11:02 PM
I hope to see how Xander's family was affected by the game
11/6/21, 9:53 PM
great story !
11/6/21, 3:21 PM
hoooo boy,that was a long one. Ethan's Transformation is especially interesting,it seems like Vince was after him all along and his brother and dad (and friend) are just collateral. That being said,I'm interested to see what happens now when dad gets back home. Ethan is on his way to get fucked into submission,I assume so I'm excited to see what will happen to the others

11/6/21, 9:38 PM
@ForgottenCradle Ironically, my first draft was short relative to the rest of the series, but I felt it jumped around a lot and didn't explain things well, so I scrapped all but the first couple of pages and rewrote. Then, this happened! lol
11/6/21, 9:00 PM
Very interesting premise and progress so far! It's always nice to see a foot and sock related story! I'll look forward to see where this L dimension takes us to. ;)
11/6/21, 6:56 PM
Hot. Can't wait for more. great story.

11/6/21, 7:53 PM
@Jonanator Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!
11/6/21, 7:33 PM
Wonderful story! Really got me going!
Anonymous
11/6/21, 6:16 PM
Interesting.
Anonymous
11/6/21, 6:11 PM
Love where you’ve taken this story so far! Chapters feel like they’re a little short, but if it keeps us coming back for more I’ve no objections ;)
11/6/21, 5:46 PM
Excellent addition! Glad for another story!
A thing
11/6/21, 5:41 PM
reading this was a journey! i really enjoyed it!