Recent Comments

11/6/21, 1:51 PM
I wanted to like this but as Razz TFs pointed out above, the change of perspective (1st, 2nd and 3rd person) was really distracting and made it quite hard to get into the flow. It’s a shame because it was otherwise a great premise.

11/6/21, 4:45 PM
@Ruffcub let me see if I can make some more edits. Sometimes things get missed in the editing process. Thanks for pointing it out.
11/6/21, 4:22 PM
Stunningly hot. I didn't know about your previous stories but I'm definitely going to read them and I look forward to future ones!
11/6/21, 3:46 PM
Oh God, this was the one I was waiting for. I can't wait to read it. I need my morning coffee though. Excited!
11/6/21, 3:22 PM
This story is so fucking hot! I love stories like this, with lots of exhibitionism and accidental sex!!! And the slow build up is great too. I can't wait to read more!!!
Cracker
11/6/21, 2:40 PM
Keeps getting better and better
Anonymous
11/6/21, 2:38 PM
Damn, this story is unbelievably hot. I absolutely love this series. Great work again!
11/6/21, 2:13 PM
super hot!!! loved the transformations. your descriptions are fantastic
11/6/21, 1:35 PM
Love that you had both guys turn into daddy and cub. Can't wait to see what you do to the officer.
11/6/21, 11:56 AM
Excellent - I'm loving how you're layering new elements of this over the stuff you introduced in the first chapter. Great job man, looking forward to more!

11/6/21, 12:34 PM
@Dace Kind words man
11/6/21, 12:04 PM
Brilliant, loving the evolution of their relationship and the new dimension of dominance and training it brings to this. Seriously, well done!

11/6/21, 12:33 PM
@Dace Thanks man!