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11/6/21, 3:10 AM
This was so good that I want to call the seduction "believable" except it's a literal demonic creature using literal seduction magic. Very hot, flirty, and fun to read. Thanks for posting!
11/6/21, 2:55 AM
I would love to see longer chapters and more of them. this series is what i wanna see
Cracker
11/5/21, 10:56 PM
super hot

11/6/21, 2:45 AM
@Cracker thanks man
11/6/21, 2:25 AM
what a hot story. love how the ghost or what ever change them from farther & son to brothers. Then to lover's. I really love the whole daddy part.
11/6/21, 1:57 AM
Love love love this idea. So much fun to do a reality competition format. It's a really good mixture of eroticism and light-hearted humour/entertainment with the competition. Well done!
Adonis
11/6/21, 1:35 AM
Sorry for the weird indentations with the bolded parts. I also don't know how this looks on the phone, so please tell me if there are any issues and it will go back to looking how it did in the first chapter.
11/6/21, 1:03 AM
I did enjoy this story, because it was very descriptive in a pretty fun way of a lot of great kinks... but on the other hand, I found it difficult to read at parts. The perspective was shifting very quickly, from 1st person, to 3rd person, and at points even 2nd person, where the reader was David? Maybe it's my bad for reading while high and getting lost, but it took a bit of focus to follow. At parts it seemed like two different versions edited together, where it was morning and Nate was making breakfast, and it was afternoon/evening and he'd ordered pizza.
Anonymous
11/5/21, 11:01 PM
I like this 2nd version ending a lot! Very hot!
Cracker
11/5/21, 10:43 PM
AWESOME
11/5/21, 10:22 PM
Super hot. Super super hot. Love the idea. Seeing more students getting turned into good boys is great.