Recent Comments

7/11/25, 3:29 PM
Love your superhero stories section. My favorite one is “Super Dude Gets Done.”
7/11/25, 12:27 PM
You outdo yourself, Jack! I read and reread your works of art.
Jul 8, 2025
DepressedRandomPerson
7/11/25, 12:05 PM
Guess the curse affected the men in the family as well.:rofl: Don't really like the racist elements , but even the story itself calls itself out on that and it affects both parties.
6/27/24, 2:37 PM
This is great. Such a good mix of horny and story. Cant wait for more!

6/30/24, 11:38 PM
@[Kyle Cage](/user/show/1756274) Hey Kyle, thanks for your comment! I appreciate it. Thanks for reading!

Anonymous
7/1/24, 12:04 PM
@[monarch_mvl118](/user/show/28683) Hey. Where is the third part /:-)

7/11/25, 5:32 AM
@Anonymous Still brainstorming for it. Hoping to start writing it soon.
6/25/25, 6:15 AM
This is a great work, i will wait to see more of you

7/11/25, 5:31 AM
@[Pan2109](/user/show/10008961) Thank you! I'm still brainstorming part 3. I'm hoping to start writing it soon.
7/11/25, 4:34 AM
Thanks so much guys! I've edited it to fix the formatting so hopefully it will be more readable. Just finished chapter 2 waiting for approval.
7/10/25, 10:50 PM
Excellently written and white-hot. Loved the competing narratives.

7/11/25, 3:54 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) I'm planning to use Ollie and Ed as a framing narrative, so they'll be back but not right away! Hope that there's some more characters and hot action that grabs you though. Part 2 has some set up/exposition for Ed as a younger man and the situation he finds himself then Part 3 is...pretty hot, I think.. White-hot? I really value that compliment. Thank you for the comment.
7/11/25, 3:48 AM
The writing here is stellar. I could smell the sea salt and lavender, hear the distant crashing of ocean waves just as loudly as the empty silences in the great halls, and feel the heat coming off the stones of those buildings in the lazy sunny afternoon. Eden is its own character here, and its quiet strength can be overwhelming. Most of all, I could feel David's heartache, regrets, and struggles as he sees first hand and maybe, really, for the first time, just what he could've had. It's all so much shattered glass and that's what I'm here for.
7/9/25, 10:35 PM
This is such a clever spin on the prompt. Also it's really damn funny? The Pride-themed gun being plastered with **‘Hi, gay! Buy product!’** lmao... I love how creative this is (you do a lot of effective and subtle worldbuilding around how the VR works in this world, without it ever feeling clunky!), and I also love how well-characterized both the dudes are. Their banter and dynamic feels very real (and also cracked me up a lot). I know it's just the prologue chapter, but this is really fun to read! (Plus, I can easily predict that what happens to our homophobic dudes in the next chapter is going to get very hot lol)

7/11/25, 2:25 AM
@[Nu and the Nus](/user/show/25270) WOW! This comment is so kind! Yeah, as someone who has spent WAY too much time in Marvel Rivals lobbies, I really enjoyed capturing the hyper-specific vibe of dudes shooting the shit in a game lobby. Hope you enjoy the next chapter!