Recent Comments

Evan
11/3/21, 4:45 AM
Very excited to see more. Great first part. Excellent writing, as Hypnothrill says. Hot elements, a mystery, and eager for more.
11/3/21, 4:40 AM
Wow that was awesome! Great work!
11/3/21, 3:16 AM
I love this series so much!
Kyle343
11/3/21, 1:42 AM
Lol, fellow author, The Slaver, plagiarized this story: https://mcstories.com/WidburnsTurnabout/WidburnsTurnabout.html
Anonymous
11/3/21, 1:39 AM
Definitely HOT! Love when arrogant jocks gets a taken down a peg (bottle) or two or three. Hehehe. Definitely one of my favorite stories. MORE PLEASE. I want to see Jax's COMPLETE submission to Chris. Hehehe
11/3/21, 1:35 AM
Ansolutely incredible, and did not see that turn at the end coming. This continues to be fresh and exciting!
11/2/21, 11:25 PM
As ever, you write brilliant stories. I loved the moment he found he was shorter. That's a kink I think I got from reading your stories in my teens. Absolutely loved the back and forth, the moment he realised his premis was wrong. You're a master of the smart to dumb story man and I love the raygun! Thanks for another great story. It's your stories which got me writing.

11/3/21, 12:49 AM
Thanks so much @Lusty Stallion! I've got a major kink for shorter guys. I'm six foot, and if a genie showed up and told me I could be 5'4", I'd jump at it. I'm sure it's just a 'grass is greener' thing, but that doesn't stop me from lusting after it. As for the premise, I'm with Monroe on this one. Being smart *is* dumb. I'm trying to make my thirties about just letting myself be hotter and dumber, and so far I'm happy with the result. You'd be surprised how much lower stress life gets when you don't over-analyze everything. My new mantra is 'don't try to be a himbo. be a himbo.'
11/3/21, 12:15 AM
Hoooooot loved the fingering.
11/2/21, 5:38 AM
so hot! can't wait for more! maybe some witches cursing rude jocks or some fun costume transformations

11/2/21, 10:35 PM
@Horn - thanks. I've run out of time for writing at the mo but have so many ideas, I'll get to part to ASAP. Your comments spurring me on.
Ricky Redman
11/2/21, 10:23 PM
I wanna be a loyal employee of NO Security Services.