Recent Comments

boi98229
2/19/20, 9:01 AM
Good start; looking forward to the continuation.

Anonymous
11/3/21, 5:39 PM
Just responding to my earlier comment from a year and a half ago! Not just a good start as i had originally said -- it's a great start! So so hot! My only negative comment is that you haven't added another chapter yet!! i feel like Terry now -- all tied up in knots and edged to the point of exploding, and you just took your hand off my dick!! Please, Sir, more! Please, Sir, i need more!
Cracker
11/3/21, 8:35 AM
Damn. A great story right from the start.

11/3/21, 4:57 PM
@Cracker Thanks man!

Cracker
11/3/21, 5:08 PM
Buddy they are amazing chapters. Maybe message me here or email me [mine is on my stories] I'd love to talk writer to writer@Jack Parker
11/3/21, 3:31 PM
Chris and wrestling very interesting wonder where you got that idea....hmmm. ;-/
11/3/21, 11:49 AM
fuck, now I need to go home and wank to this! the long wait is over, I can't wait to read this!

11/3/21, 12:07 PM
@Erratic101 Good reading, buddy! If it brought you as much happiness as I hope, let me know it! Enjoy it, and thanks for the support!
Anonymous
11/3/21, 11:48 AM
This keeps getting better and better!!
11/3/21, 10:11 AM
Well oops,seems like master's musk is more potent than anyone realized seems like Coach got it next lol
11/3/21, 8:49 AM
I'm loving the building tension (headaches)! It's hot and full of plot! Everything about this story is just great, the pacing, the characters, the drama. Another few chapter and I'll just be typing incoherently.
11/2/21, 3:33 PM
This is super sexy. Super hot and sexy. Love this series. Also the idea that things are causing the minions of the master (hehe) to also lead to the submission of others is quite hot. Also I am a sucker for happiness so I like the idea that the captain still has room in his heart for his girlfriend. Maybe a line can be had that showcases that she sorts of gets effected in that she realizes its totally normal for her boyfriend to submit to the master and play with the other good boys. Like its not cheating, its just natural. hehe

11/3/21, 8:21 AM
Thanks @Heru Kane . Been very happy to read your feedback. And spoiler alert, I do like happy endings as well XP
11/3/21, 8:19 AM
*Holy* fuck. Wow. Just. * Chef's Kiss*
11/3/21, 8:19 AM
Lmao, just realized I accidentally disabled comments. Was eagerly waiting for them